ppc en anglais pourriez vous me la corriger... ?

Sujet du devoir

cc j'ai fait un dialogue en anglais et je voudras avoir ce que vous en pensez ... voici la consigne:

eleve a: souhaite louer ou acheter une maison ou iun appart. vous vous rendez dans une agance immobiliere et rencontrer un agent immobilier vouslui faite part de vos exigenses...

eleve b: vous etes l 'agent  immobilier .vous proposez un panel de maison a l'acheteur et ce que vous avez a disposition.elle doit correspondre aux exigenses du client .

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

voici ce que g fait , dites moi ce ke je dois faire pour m'ameliorer:

b:good morning

a: good morning

b:can i help you?

a:yes i have a appointment with you

b: you must be miss Dupre

a:yeah

b:could you give me more informations about your futur house ?

a:i want a semi-detached house withe two floors and two bathrooms thee or foor bedrooms

b:i'm sorry i don't find this house.

a: oh no! what have you got?

b: i have a semi-detached house in the north of london and and other one in de sud , and an detached house in the ouest

a: how is the detached hose

b: it's little house with two floors and a garden

a: how many rooms please

b: there are one bathroom two bedrooms a kitchen and one livind room. over there we can see the garden because their are a big window and a garage.

a: oh it's great

b : yes and in the living room there is a big fireplace and an atic . i know this house isn't very big but there is all you need.ther is a lot of shops less than seven hundred meters away and the subway and bus are also listed.

a: this house looks good and very confortable

b: yes . do you want to buy or rent it?

a: i think i will buy this house. how much cost it?

b it cost 800000£

a: it's ok thank you very much good bye

b:bye

voila.