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Publié le 15 avr. 2016 il y a 8A par Anonyme - Fin › 18 avr. 2016 dans 8A
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Sujet du devoir

Je doit faire une biographie de Charles Dickens pou mardi 16avril

 

 

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

The name is Cherles Dickens. He was born on the 7tn of the february 1812. His parents were John and Elizabeth Dickens. He had 7 brothers and sisters. Six survived to adulthood.His family moved to London in 1822. He started working at the age of 12 in a factory labelling bottles. He worked 11hours a days. His father lived above his means and was sent to prison for debt.Charles visited himevery sunday.He became a soliitor clerck in 1827 and a journalist in 1837 but he had a passion for writing. He worked during the day and wrote at night. He published his first novel in 1835.Hi married Catherine Howard. And they had many children. He visited the United States in 1842 and Italie in 1844. He got divorced because himet an actress and fell in love with her. He died on the 9th of June 1870 of a stroke. He was buried in Westmirster Abbey.

 

 

MERCI DE M'AIDER  




4 commentaires pour ce devoir


willffy
willffy
Posté le 15 avr. 2016

His  name is Charles Dickens

Pour le reste, je ne suis pas assez compétente .

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Anonyme
Posté le 15 avr. 2016

En gras et en italique les fautes que j'ai remarqué

The (comme l'a dit Gamy ici il faut mettre His) name is Cherles (Charles)Dickens. He was born on the 7tn of the (inutile) February 1812. His parents were John and Elizabeth Dickens. He had 7 brothers and sisters. Six survived to adulthood. His family moved to London in 1822. He started working at the age of 12 in a factory labelling bottles. He worked 11 hours a days.

His father lived above his means and was sent to prison for debt (?). Charles visited him every sunday. He became a soliitor (solicitor ?) clerck in 1827 and a journalist in 1837 but he had a passion for writing.

He worked during the day and wrote at night. He published his first novel in 1835. Hi married Catherine Howard. (He is married with ) And they had many children. He visited the United States in 1842 and Italie (Italy) in 1844. He got divorced because himet (he met)an actress and fell in love with her. He died on the 9th of June 1870 of a stroke. He was buried in Westmirster (Westminster) Abbey.

Aère un peu ton texte en sautant des lignes

Anonyme
Posté le 15 avr. 2016

Merci beaucoup pour ta réponse pour debt c'est ma prof qu le écrit dans le cour

 

 

Anonyme
Posté le 15 avr. 2016

Moi aussi j avais une biographie a faire en anglais sur William Shakespeare je l'ai faite . Tu es en quel classe

 


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