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John Winterhayes wrote a letter to his mother when he arrived in new South Wales.Imagine the letter he wrote her.You must mention:
a)his feelings when he left England
b)how long the journey took
c)the weather,the food,other problems
d)his feelings during the journey
e)arriving in Australia.
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Monday 23 January 1835Dear mother,
I traveled by ship from England to Australia,I was sent to Autralia at New South Wales in a prison colony by British magistrate.I am send here for seven years.When I quitted England,I was scared and sad about quitting my family and my country.I've been transported by coach from London to a chip that was going to Australia;the journey was difficult,I experienced water difficulties,a bad weather and I suffered in the famine during the travel because there wasn't any food on the ship.The travel was unpleasent and terrifying because there was a terrible storm.I was scared and seasick at the same time and I was both afraid and hungry.My journey was too long due to the bad weather and food's problems,it tooked at least three months.
When I arrived to Australia,I have been sent to prison colony in New South Wales,I've been transported to that place by coach.I felt frightened because it wasn't my country, I was also sad because I've been separated from my family,I miss you already mom! you and my brothers too!
Your dear son
John Winterhayes.
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merci de ton aide!je réécris:
Monday 23 January 1835
Dear mother,
I traveled by ship from England to Australia,I was sent to Autralia at New South Wales in a prison colony for seven years by the British magistrate.When I lift England,I was scared and sad about leaving my family and my country.I was transported by coach from London to a chip that was going to Australia;the journey was difficult,I experienced water difficulties,a bad weather and I suffered in the famine during the travel because there wasn't any food on the ship.The travel was unpleasent and terrifying because there was a terrible storm.I was scared and seasick at the same time and I was both afraid and hungry.My journey was too long due to the bad weather and food's problems,it tooked at least three months.
When I arrived to Australia,I was sent to prison colony in New South Wales,I was transported there by coach.I felt frightened because it wasn't my country, I was also sad because I was separated from my family,I miss you already mom! you and my brothers too!
Your dear son John Winterhayes.
Monday 23 January 1835
Dear mother,
I traveled by ship from England to Australia,I was sent to Autralia at New South Wales in a prison colony for seven years by the British magistrate.When I lift England,I was scared and sad about leaving my family and my country.I was transported by coach from London to a chip that was going to Australia;the journey was difficult,I experienced water difficulties,a bad weather and I suffered in the famine during the travel because there wasn't any food on the ship.The travel was unpleasent and terrifying because there was a terrible storm.I was scared and seasick at the same time and I was both afraid and hungry.My journey was too long due to the bad weather and food's problems,it tooked at least three months.
When I arrived to Australia,I was sent to prison colony in New South Wales,I was transported there by coach.I felt frightened because it wasn't my country, I was also sad because I was separated from my family,I miss you already mom! you and my brothers too!
Your dear son John Winterhayes.
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tu as confondu le présent et l'imparfait 2ème phrase I was send here...
on ne dit pas when I quitted ; mais when I left, je suppose que tu veux dire quitter
about le leaving...
bateau is ship avec un s; unpleasant (avec un a)
I've been transported (attention ce n'est pas le bon temps, tu devrais parler à l'imparfait)idem I've been separated