Besoin d'une aide pour corriger un texte en anglais

Publié le 15 déc. 2011 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 17 déc. 2011 dans 12A
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Bonjour, Je cherche une aide pour corriger un texte en anglais. Ce texte résume en quelques phrases un projet sur le thème de l'ennui que je réalise en design conception création textile.
merci d'avance pour votre aide
marion

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The boredom disturbs me and I like that ! I worry about the boredom.
Boredom is often viewed as something négative whereas it can be positive.
The boredom cares me because it's a subject very current and registered in our society.
I have the sensation that this boredom as time goes by increased while we live in a society which is against it.
The era's entertainment is king. Everything is made so that we don't bore.
I want to confront me at these empty moments . The boredom is a kind of stimulating which help to develop basic principles " to keep boredom at bay".


I think that we don't bored when we speak about boredom. On the contrary I ask questions like:
The boredom has a color?
Between full and empty , which is the most boring ?
The boredom can be quantified?
The boredom has a movement?
I realize that I graduate the boredom.
"To keep boredom at bay" it's my stake's work . I think the boredom and the time are inseparable.
But several situations exist.

I associate these various situations of boredom with my questions.
For example, when the boredom is a disruptive event, I associate withthe color.
The color which disrupting this monotonous grey.
When the boredom means " to support a moment", I have the idea to fold according to precise rules of symmetry.
This action distracts me from this boredom.
In another case of boredom, I have this feeling of absence. I deal and think about the track. I draw, to make tracking of my boredom.


In reality quite these forms of boredom become axes. This axes developed a vocabulary, a sensation, a state, which I am going to try to translate elastically to become finally thé track of my boredom, or the felt by this boredom.



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