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Publié le 15 janv. 2012 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 22 janv. 2012 dans 12A
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Sujet du devoir

Bonjour, avec un ami nous devions raconter les retrouvailles entre un immigrants partis aux états-unis et sa famille. Je vous présente donc notre travail je vous demande d'être indulgents concernant la traduction nous avons fais de notre mieux. Merci d'avance pour votre aide.


Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Texte en français:

Après un long séjour passé aux USA, Bernado décida de rentrer dans son pays natal à savoir Porto Rico. Et ceci pour multiples raisons auxquelles il n’aurait jamais pensé auparavant.

- Oh Bernado ?! Qu’elle heureuse surprise ! Que fais-tu là ? La raison t’a enfin poussé à revenir parmi nous ? Lui dit sa mère quelque peu excité par l’étonnement de son retour.

- Oui, j’ai tellement de chose à vous raconter… Ca fait beaucoup de bien de tous vous revoir.

- Et moi dont, je suis si heureuse que tu sois revenu à la maison, lui dit sa mère tout en le serrant dans ses bras.

- Après un bref instant d’émotion, Il est tant que je vous raconte mon voyage aux USA, et disons que ce n’était pas une réussite… Avant mon départ pour les USA, je croyais tant au rêve Américain, mais ce n’est plus vraiment le cas. Cela ressemblait plus à un cauchemar Américain.

- J’avais tant de peine le jour de ton départ si tu savais… Et j’avais comme l’impression que ce voyage n’était pas une bonne idée, tu connaissais mon avis à ce sujet… Raconte-nous tout.

- Le jour où j’ai débarqué sur le sol Américain, tout me paraissait si grandiose, s’était comme ci tout devenait si facile. Les premiers jours étaient difficiles, mais je m’attendais à cette situation tout en espérant que les choses s’améliorent, comme je l’avais prévu ; la seule chose positive était que je n’étais pas seul, d’autres Portoricains faisait parti du voyage. Nous étions donc un petit groupe d’immigrant, et solidaire entre nous. Puis les jours passaient, défilaient peu à peu, et rien n’allait.
- Tu avais au moins un endroit où te loger ?

- S’était bien là la source du problème… Je n’avais ni travail, ni logement. Après quelques temps dans la misère et à la recherche d’un emploie, moi et mes amis avions trouvés chacun un petit job. Bien que celui-ci était mal bien payé, cela nous suffisaient à se nourrir ainsi qu’à se cotiser pour payer notre loyer que l’on avait en commun. Il n’était vraiment pas évident de s’en sortir… Tous avaient un regard raciste sur les étrangers. Notre couleur de peau ainsi que notre accent étaient voué à l’échec : un job sans gloire et sous-payé ; des conditions de vie misérable avec de mauvaises conditions d’hébergement, logé dans des ghettos, nous étions 12 par chambre… Une violence importante était présente dans ces ghettos. Et plus particulièrement de nombreux conflits face au gang des Jets, un groupe d’américain blanc. Nous étions les Shark.


Traduction:
After a long period spent in the United States, Bernardo decided to return to his native Puerto Rico to know. And this for many reasons which it would never have thought of before.

- Oh Bernado?! She pleasantly surprised! What are you doing here? The reason thee finally pushed back among us? His mother told him a little excited the astonishment of his return.

- Yes, I have so much to tell you ... That's a lot of good to see you all.

- And me with, I'm so glad you're back home, said his mother while still hugging.

- After a brief moment of emotion, it is as I tell you my journey in the United States, and say that it was not a success ... Before I left for the United States, I thought as the American dream, but n ' is really the case. This was more like an American nightmare.

- I had so much trouble on the day of your departure if you knew ... And I had a feeling that this trip was not a good idea, I think you knew about it ... Tell us all.

- The day I landed on American soil, all seemed so grandiose, it was like everything became so easy. The first days were difficult, but I expected this and hope that things improve as I expected, the only good thing was that I was not alone, other Puerto Ricans was part the trip. So we were a small group of immigrant, and several of us. Then the days passed, marching slowly, and nothing was wrong.

- You had at least one place where you live?

- Had indeed the source of the problem ... I had no job, no housing. After some time in poverty and in search of a job, me and my friends had found each a small job. Although it was poorly-paid, that would suffice to feed themselves and to contribute to pay our rent that we had in common. It really was not easy to get out ... They all look racist foreigners. Color of our skin and our focus was doomed to failure: an inglorious job and underpaid, miserable living conditions with poor housing conditions, housed in ghettos, we were 12 per room ... A violence important was present in these ghettos. Especially many conflicts facing the Jets gang, a group of white American. We were the Shark.



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Anonyme
Posté le 16 janv. 2012
After spending a long time in the US, Bernardo decided to come back to his native country Puerto Rico. and for many reasons he had not even thought of before
Oh bernardo?
What a surprise! What are you doing here? Why did you come back here? His mother said both excited and surprised by his return.
I have so many things to tell you… It is so great to see you all!
And I am so happy that you are back home, replied his mother
After such an emotion, it is time for me to tell you about my trip to the US and I have to admit it was not that good! Before leaving for America, I strongly believed in the American dream but this is no longer like this. It was an American nightmare.
I was so sad when you left... you know.. I had the gut feeling that this trip was not a good idea, you knew what I thought about it.. Tell us everything!
On my arrival in America, everything looked huge… it was as if everything was easy. The first days were difficult but I expected it hoping that it would be better soon! The only positive thing is that I was not alone. There were other Puerto Ricans on this trip. We were a small group of immigrants and very united. As days went by, everything was becoming worse. You had somewhere to go didn’t you?
That was the problem. I did not have any work, home, After being in the need and looking for a job, I and my friends found a job. Although it was badly paid, it was enough to cover our basic needs and our rent. It was not easy to go out. Everybody there had an unreasonable fear of foreigners. Our color skin and accent led us to badly paid jobs, poor living and housing conditions in ghettos, we were 12 to share a room! Violence was very significant in the ghettos. There were many conflicts with the jets, a white gang. We were the Sharks

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