Aide en Anglais

Publié le 19 avr. 2011 il y a 13A par Anonyme - Fin › 26 avr. 2011 dans 13A
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Sujet du devoir

Coucou ,
Alors voila j'ai un devoir à faire en anglais ,je devais répondre à des questions après avoir lu un texte.
J'ai répondu mais le,probleme c'est que je suis vraiment pas sur au niveau de l'orthographe ,des temps et aussi pour le sens de mes phrases.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

2/The scene happens in a (concessionaire de voiture).
More precisely in Mercedes.
A brand known worldwide for selling cars very expensive but good quality.
The men enjoy buying cars this mark, Chukie went there to buy a car, even two.

3/I think Chuckie is a social class, average.
He was not rich and never could afford to buy a car as expensive

4/When Chuckie is back in the shop. The first reaction of the sellers was contemptuous, because at first glance Chuks did not seem to be a person who can afford to go into this kind of shop.
he was not sure of himself, he seemed (hesitant).
The sellers were

8/The call to the bank to change everything.
Indeed, before the phone call sellers do not take seriously Chuks.
They did not think he had the means to afford a car like that.
After the bank confirmed that Chuks had enough money to pay for a car even two!
The altitude of the seller has completely changed.
he began to take seriously Chuckie, he even did his best smile.
Like what money can change a lot

12/Chuckie is completely terrified, her life has changed.
Before he had a sad life overcharged, he was not rich, he had no success ... not really the life that everyone dreams!
Whereas now it has everything to be happy
Money, success and a woman he loves.
A life that everyone dreamed of having.
And this change make him afraid ..







Merci d'avance si vous avez du mal à comprendre le sens de certaine phrase,car j'ai eu du mal lol dite le moi




11 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 19 avr. 2011
the scene takes place at a ca
Anonyme
Posté le 19 avr. 2011
the scene takes place art a car dealer's, a Mercedes dealer.
.....for selling expensive and good quality cars.
Men enjoy buying cars this make

3 I think C is a middle class person.
The first reaction of the salesmen is contempt....doesn't seem...who can (tout au present ou tout au passé, il faut choisir)
Anonyme
Posté le 19 avr. 2011
the scene takes place art a car dealer's, a Mercedes dealer.
.....for selling expensive and good quality cars.
Men enjoy buying cars this make

3 I think C is a middle class person.
The first reaction of the salesmen is contempt....doesn't seem...who can (tout au present ou tout au passé, il faut choisir)
Anonyme
Posté le 19 avr. 2011
8- the call to the bank changes everything
...the salesmen do not take C seriously
il y a combien de vendeurs : salesman /salesmen

the attitude of the salesman has completely changed, he begins to take C seriously he even does his best smile.


money can work miracles
Anonyme
Posté le 19 avr. 2011
12 C is completely 'terrified', his life has changed.
je ne connais pas le texte , est-ce qu'il est terrifié?

He used to have a boring /sad life , he was overworked

...not really the life one dreams of, whereas now he has ...

The kind of life everyone dreams of and this change makes him afraid (= this change scares him)
Anonyme
Posté le 19 avr. 2011
+ court

The scene takes place at a Mercedes dealer's.
Anonyme
Posté le 20 avr. 2011
2/The scene takes place at a car dealer's that sells Mercedes cars.A brand known worldwide for selling very expensive cars but of good quality.
men enjoy buying cars of this brand. Chukie went there to buy a car, he even bought two.
3/I think Chuckie is from the middle class.
He was not rich and could not afford to buy a car as expensive

4/When Chuckie is back in the shop. The first reaction of the sellers was contemptuous, because at first glance Chuks did not seem to be a person who can afford to go into this kind of store..
he was not sure of himself, he seemed hesitative.
The sellers were

8/The call to the bank to change everything.
Indeed, before the phone call sellers did not take seriously Chuks.
They did not think he had enough money to afford a car like that.
After the bank confirmed that Chuks had enough money to buy a car even two!
The seller's attitude completely changed.
he began to take Chuckie seriousy, he even did give him a smile.
money can change a lot

12/Chuckie is completely terrified, his life has changed.
Before he had a sad life , he was not rich, he had no success ... not really the life that everyone dreamed!
Whereas now he has everything to be happy
Money, success and a woman he loves.
A life that everyone dreamed of.
And this change scares him..



Anonyme
Posté le 20 avr. 2011
Franchement, tu as bon niveau d'anglais. Il y a peu de fautes ! Bravo continue !
Anonyme
Posté le 20 avr. 2011
à la place de terrifié, je mettrais upset qui veut dire chamboulé.
Anonyme
Posté le 20 avr. 2011
Merci beaucoup pour ton aide, je vais pouvoir corriger toutes mes fautes! :)
Anonyme
Posté le 20 avr. 2011
Merci beaucoup pour m'avoir aidé!! :)
Moi je trouve pas que j'ai un si bon niveau que ça mais merci :)

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