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In conclusion, the prison has good sides, because it helps to think about their great deeds and because civilization feels much safer. But do not forget all their faults because petis criminals alongside serious criminals, prison is a school of crime, prison life is miserable and that in our judicial system there are people who do not have the right a second chanceOù j'en suis dans mon devoir
voilà ce que j'ai écris et je voudrais savoir si il y a des fautes car je ne suis pas très fortes en anglais...2 commentaires pour ce devoir
Bonjour 1s2,
Effectivement il y a quelques petites fautes, mais sinon c'est bien écrit:
"In conclusion, the JAIL has good sides, because it helps to think about their great deeds and because civilization feels much safer. But do not forget all their faults because LITTLE criminals alongside serious criminals, prison is a school of crime, prison life is miserable and that in our judicial system there are people who do not have RIGHT TO A SECOND CHANCE."
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème
Effectivement il y a quelques petites fautes, mais sinon c'est bien écrit:
"In conclusion, the JAIL has good sides, because it helps to think about their great deeds and because civilization feels much safer. But do not forget all their faults because LITTLE criminals alongside serious criminals, prison is a school of crime, prison life is miserable and that in our judicial system there are people who do not have RIGHT TO A SECOND CHANCE."
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème
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Alors, il y a quelques fautes effectivement
"petis criminals alongside serious criminals,"
Tu voulais dire "petit criminels?" car tu as écris "petis."..
Ensuite au lieu de "Prison"--> "Jail" c'est mieux, ton professeur appréciera mieux...
"But they don't forget their mistakes"...
Sinon le reste ca passe....( si tu me mets ce que tu veux dire en français j'essayerai de traduire autrement =D )