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Bonjour j'ai fait un texte en anglais j'aimerais avoir une correction c,'est un souvenir du coup c'est les temps du passé simple past et past perfect et défois je me trompe sur l'utilité en fonction des phrases merci d'avance
When I was little, I and my parents made a trip by car, we traveled France to go to Spain, and during this trip I had a notebook on board.
When I was little, I and my parents made a trip by car, we cross France to go to Spain, and during this trip I had a notebook on board.
Today is July 17th, 2011, and I am excited to discover the city and the activities. First we went to the sea, there were a lot of people and the sea was breathtaking !, I had never seen so many people in one place, it was very hot and I rushed into the sea It was the first time that I was swimming alone in a foreign country, it was incredible.Then, we went swimming with dolphins, in the past I had never seen dolphins in real life, I had a lot scared but when I caught on to the dolphins, it was a dream come true, I felt like I was flying. Afterwe went to a Spanish restaurant which was very beautiful, I have eaten a delicious dish, it was a wonderful moment with my parents. Finally, in the evening at about 10PM, we went outside and we visited the city, where my father bought me a bracelet that I love, and then we went back to the hotel.
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When I was little, my parents and I made a trip by car, we traveled from France to Spain, and during this trip I had a notebook on board.
When I was little, I and my parents made a trip by car, we crossed France to go to Spain, and during this trip I had a notebook on board.
Là je ne comprend pas, c'est aujourd'hui que tu vas à la mer ou est-ce que c'était le 17 juillet ? Dans ce cas tu dis : On july 17th, I was really excited to discover the city and the activities. Today is July 17th, 2011, and I am excited to discover the city and the activities. First we went to the sea, there were a lot of people and the sea was breathtaking !, I had never seen so many people in one place, it was very hot and I rushed into the sea It was the first time that I was swimming alone in a foreign country, it was incredible. Then, we went swimming with dolphins, in the past I had never seen dolphins in real life, I was really scared but when I started swimming with (ou caughting on to) the dolphins, I felt like it was a dream come true, like I was flying. After, we went to a Spanish restaurant which was very beautiful, I ate/had a delicious dish, it was a wonderful moment with my parents. Finally, in the evening at about 10PM, we went outside and we visited the city, where my father bought me a bracelet that I love, and then we went back to the hotel.