expression écrite ; réussir sa vie

Sujet du devoir

Bonjour à tous , je dois faire une expression . Le thème s'intitule : what is your idea of a successful life .
Pouvez vous me dire ou sont mes fautes .
Merci

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

There are several possible criteria, to make a success of his life, such as , To help people, to make a success of studies , living in a happy familly,
We'll see that there are certain criteria that are important and other criteria that are less important.



To begin with, I am interested at criteria which are for me less important.
I prefer to live in house small than to live in a big house because I must finding a well-paid job,
The second criterion is to living in luxury.
I think we have to live with what we have everyone cannot live in luxury. Personally I don't live in luxury and I live very well.
Nevertheless it exist other criteria which are important.


The first criterion which comes to mind is successful study.
It is essential because it allows to do what we want.
For example: if one succeeded not in his studies, one will not be able to make a trade which one likes,

The second criterion which is also important is to succeed in my life is to help people.
That is important because it gives a direction to life.
I felt proud to have helped my grandmother in difficult moments .
But it should not be forgotten that family and good friends are also important to make a success of the life, because the family allows me to have my bearings , to help in my choices, to be constant.
Friends are there to give me a smile in the difficult moments, but the friends can spend quality time together.

In conclusion, studies, helping people , family and friends are for me the essential criteria to succeed in life.