Expression écrite: Do you think parents should choose their children's future jobs? (150-200 mots).

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Do you think parents should choose their children's future jobs? (150-200 mots).
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Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

I think parents shouldn't choose their childrens future jobs because their childrens should be free to choose the job they want . Parents shouldn't affect them because sometimes , some parents wants a specific job to their childrens that childrens doesn't want to do . Then , childrens can do a job that they doesn't like because the job was imposed . They could be easily bored and feel bad. Moreover, I think that choosing a job is a personnal thing, everyone is different in the world so that they should choose for their own.I could understand that some parents choose the options when children are in highschool but then when they grow up and attend University, children are adults and so they know how to live. It is a question of maturity and truthfull.