image de pub

Merci beaucoup je corrige cela et je reviens.

Alors j'ai trouver
He behaves likes everybody
C'est juste?

You can see two face in this advert.The man's face in front reflected by the mirror.And the man's skull in behind.(Ca fait lourd un peu?)
His skull is crack, maybe this is a relationship with the planet.They are in danger.
His face is perfect.
Maybe,it mean that we don't tend to the veritable problems

J'ai oublier je le mettrais au début
The man is in his bathroom
En ce qui concerne le logo, en fait il ne faut pas l'expliquer car notre professeur nous a dit qu'il faut qu'il soit en bas à droite de la pub
Et comme c'est une pub italienne pour la sauvegarde de la planéte
Merci encore pour votre aide
Est ce mieux ce que j'ai fait?

Félicitations! Il faut seulement mettr les choses dans l'ordre:
1- ce que je vois
2- ce que je comprends.

Pour l'anglais:
He behaves like everybody.
He cares for his face but not for his back / his skull (son crane) because he doesn't see it in the mirror or beacause this is not what people can see at first sight.
However, his skull is deeply cracked and looks like arid regions on the earth.

Voilà un peu d'aide. Le travail s'améliore doucement et surement!
Bonne continuation!

Merci beaucoup,Thank you very much,Grazzie mille,Choukran ^^
Alors je vais remettre dans l'ordre tout d'abord
Ensuite je le remettrai
Merci encore
Sinon mon anglais est correct?

Bon, pour l'anglais, il faut faire attention au vocabulaire :
une ride = a wrinKle
une étagère = a shelf
la pommade = oinment
la crème = cream
realtionship = une relation entre des personnes
une relation, un lien = a link
la figure, le visage = the face
"commfort" n'existe pas. "coMfort" = le confort matériel ou l'aisance (financière par exemple)

He likes everybody (at last almost).me semble exagéré. "He behaves like most people nowadays" est suffisant, non?

And the man's skull is a close_ up (un gros plan) His skull is crackED, maybe this is a relationship with the planet.They are in danger.
His face is perfect.

Bon, un petit coup de pouce supplémentaire!

In this advert, we can see a man fom behind. He is in a bathroom and he is looking carefully at himself into the miror.He may be 30 (???), He is perfectly shaved and he is in search of wrinkles next to his eyes. As there is some "lifting-firming-anti wrinkle" cream on the shelf in front of him, we can understand he is very concerned by this physical appearance and his goog looking.

Désolée mais je n'ai pas compris:
"Maybe,it mean that we don't tend to the veritable problems"

Peut être que cela veut dire qu'il ne s'occupe pas des vrai problèmes.

Il y a des phrases que je n'ai pas compris
"He is perfectly shaved" ,"He may be 30"(Il a peut être 30 ans?)
Merci encore

"He is perfectly shaved" = il est parfaitement rasé
"He may be 30"= Il a peut être 30 ans.
Dans la phrase suivante, il y avaitune coquille, désolée...
"he is very concerned by this physical appearance and his gooD looking."
Pour la phrase "Maybe,it mean that we don't tend to the veritable problems", on peut peut-être dire quelque chose comme:
"he is not interested by real problems, by what he cannot see though(pourtant)they are much moore damaged than the visible things.

Merci je remet le texte en place et je revien l'écrire

Alors voilà comment je vais le mettre sur mon devoir :

.............This document is an advertisement and it's very striking.In this advert, we can see a man(ou bien votre phraseIn this advert, we can see a man fom behind ) .The man is in his bathroom ,looking carefully at himself into the mirror.(Cela fait moins lourd non?).He may be between 30-40 .He is perfectly shaved and he is in search of wrinkles next to his eyes.We can understand he is very concerned by his( ou this?) physical appearance and his goog looking.In fact there is a cream on the console table.
...........As there is some "lifting-firming-anti wrinkle" cream on the shelf in front of him.Moreover,he cares for his face but not for his skull because he doesn't see it in the mirror or because this isn't what people can see at first sight.He behaves like most people nowadays.
...........However, his skull is deeply cracked and looks like arid regions on the earth.He isn't interested by real problems.We evolve in a world when your personnality and your comfort is the first objective.Unfortenally, we forget the hightest important: The planet
...........I think that this advert is very important and describe the Society nowadays.

J'éspére que c'est bien(il faut que ca fasse maximum 300mots je vais essayer de réduire)
Encore merci pour votre aide précieuse, je vais essayer d'assimiler du vocabulaire en même temps ainsi que des structures de phrases.