Oral anglais correction fautes.

Publié le 9 oct. 2011 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 16 oct. 2011 dans 12A
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Sujet du devoir

Parler a l'oral durant 1 ou 2 minutes .
Mon texte :
In a cartoon showing young kids unhappy to go back to school.
In the foreground we see these children; they go to the school which is to the left of the drawing.
To the right of the drawing we see a girl with her schoolbag on the pavement in front of her, school.
(Her) mom has just put down (deposited) her (it) and she watches her daughter crying.
In the background we see a landscape with mountains and trees.
Below the drawing we can read the following sentence:
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The expression (of the face of the girl) reminds us that she does not want to go to the school because the weather is beautiful and because she wants to have fun outside and not (to go to) the school.
The school is free it is a luck (chance) to study, this will serve us to have a good job (business) later for it, it is necessary to work hard because it is for our intended.(Notre future)
The school allows to be made of new friends and thus to have a social life.
When I was small (a little girl), I liked (to go to) the school to learn new things, I found the school is easy (easy school), I had fun with my friends during the recreations (breaks).
Many children do not love the school because they have no good notes or because they do not want to learn. Some are lazy and they do not want to do homework. I think that if at the school have would have fun while learning (teaching); many children would like to go to the school.

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Anonyme
Posté le 10 oct. 2011
Tu devrais déjà présenter le dessin.
This is a picture made by....

This drawing is about children who seem to be unhappy to go back to school.



In the foreground we can see some children going to school
On the right of the drawing we see a girl with her schoolbag laying on the ground in front of her., school.
(Her) mom has just dropped her and is watching her daughter crying.
In the background mountains and trees can be seen.
Below the picture the following sentence can be read :
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Judging by the little girl’s face, we can assume that she does not want to go to the school because the weather is beautiful and she wants to have fun outside.

School is open to everybody and gives us the opportunity to study and acquire knowledge. It will enable us to have a good job later on. Beside this, I think it is also very important to work hard if we want to achieve a better life.
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School allows us to make new friends and therefore to have a social life.
When I was little, I used to like to go to school to learn new things. School was very easy for me. I had fun with my friends during break time.

Many children do not like to go to school because they do not have good grades or they have no interest in school and therefore do not want to learn. or because they do not want to learn. Some are lazy and they do not want to do their homework. I think that if school was more fun and involved less teaching, many children would like to go to the school.


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