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Salut :)En fait, j'ai un résumé à faire sur un texte, je l'ai fait et j'aimerais vous demander si vous pourriez me corrigre mes fautes :)
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Voici mon résumé:he main character is Mr Jake Claver . He has just owned first million . So he decides to change his life: he moved of his small suburban , with his wife,into an elegant london house . He finds out the pleasure of the luxe, and like all the rich people he takes two men to serve him .The one is a french chef called Mr Straggon and the second is an english butler called Kant . The both took madly expensive . However, they bring a preciousous help to the couple : they help them to organise dinner parties several times. In spite of the food wonderful and the service fautless, the dinner were always suck: they were no animations, no spark . In this way, Mr claver worries and asks to his butler what is wrong . This one answers that the problem is about the wine : the dinner is wonderful,yet it must be accompagned by a superb wine, and mr claver serves to his guest a modest wine . Mr claver is annoyed and take advices near his butler to know which are the best wine and order to him to buy all of them event though they are more that expensive .( Mr claver is ready to all to satisfect his guest) .The butler answers then that he will do all he could and he achieves to get of some twenty and forty-fives . Their prices were so astronomical, that even mr claver began to sit up and take notice . The butler arrives to reassure him telling that with these wine, he gets a considerable social asset . Mr claver begins to interest to the subjet, he read some books about it . Also, he does a deal with the butler, who learns him how taste a wine . Mr claver takes assurance and at the time of a dinner, he do notices to his guest the lewdness of the wine . Yet the guest don't take care to the talk of mr claver: It's like if mr claver didn't speak! Then he ask to the butler what is wrong . this one asks that they can't appreciate it because of the too big quantities of vinegar that mr Straggon has put , who spoil the taste . More later in the same night, mister claver mocks his butler: he explains, in front of his butler, at his guest that his butler said that the vinegar spoil the taste . Mister claver laughs at his butler publicly . This one who can't stand that, induce a plote . Indeed, he admits the tricks: In fact, the wine that they are drinking is not a forty-fives, it's a modest, odious, and cheap, spanish wine. Mr Kant and mr Staggon drinks the very expensive wine, keep the bottle and place them on the sideboard, to make believe that it was the very expensive wine, while it was a cheaper wine that they were drinking .
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pour faire un résumé il ne faut pas plusieurs mots il faut dire : par exemple
Mr jack has win a fist million . he want chandeg his life . He bought in london a new house for himself and his wife. he talk with rich people not the poor . He ha two men for the serve him. He a take a french man his name is Mr. Straggon, this is the chef and a english man called Kant . the help for the dinner parties, the foods are wonderful etc
Mr jack has win a fist million . he want chandeg his life . He bought in london a new house for himself and his wife. he talk with rich people not the poor . He ha two men for the serve him. He a take a french man his name is Mr. Straggon, this is the chef and a english man called Kant . the help for the dinner parties, the foods are wonderful etc
Bonjour Grego,
Voici ton résumé corrigé:
"His main character is Mr Jake Claver. He has just owned his first million. So he decides to change his life: he moved out of his small suburb, with his wife, into an elegant British house. He discovers the pleasure of the luxury, and like all the rich people he takes two men to serve him. The one is a French chef called Mr Straggon and the second is an English butler called Kant. The both took madly expensive. However, they bring a precious help to the couple: they help them to organise dinner parties several times. In spite of the food wonderful and the service faultless, the dinner were always suck: they were no animations, no spark. In this way, Mr claver worries and asks to his butler what is wrong. This one answers that the problem is about the wine: the dinner is wonderful,yet it must be accompanied by a superb wine, and Mr Claver serves to his guest a modest wine. Mr claver is annoyed and take advices near his butler to know which are the best wine and order to him to buy all of them event though they are more that expensive.( Mr Claver is ready to to satisfy his guest). The butler answers then that he will do all he could and he achieves to get of some twenty and forty-fives. Their prices were so astronomical, that even Mr Claver began to sit up and take notice. The butler arrives to reassure him telling that with these wine, he gets a considerable social asset. Mr claver begins to interest to the subject, he read some books about it. Also, he does a deal with the butler, who learns him how taste a wine. Mr claver takes assurance and at the time of a dinner, he do notices to his guest the lewdness of the wine. Yet the guest don't take care to the talk of Mr Claver: It's like if Mr Claver didn't speak! Then he ask to the butler what is wrong. this one asks that they can't appreciate it because of the too big quantities of vinegar that Mr Straggon has put, who spoil the taste. More later in the same night, mister claver mocks his butler: he explains, in front of his butler, at his guest that his butler said that the vinegar spoil the taste. Mister claver laughs at his butler publicly. This one who can't stand that, induce a pilot. Indeed, he admits the tricks: In fact, the wine that they are drinking is not a forty-fives, it's a modest, odious, and cheap, Spanish wine. Mr Kant and Mr Staggon drinks the very expensive wine, keep the bottle and place them on the sideboard, to make believe that it was the very expensive wine, while it was a cheaper wine that they were drinking."
Tu devrais aérer ton texte, fait le à ta façon.
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème
Voici ton résumé corrigé:
"His main character is Mr Jake Claver. He has just owned his first million. So he decides to change his life: he moved out of his small suburb, with his wife, into an elegant British house. He discovers the pleasure of the luxury, and like all the rich people he takes two men to serve him. The one is a French chef called Mr Straggon and the second is an English butler called Kant. The both took madly expensive. However, they bring a precious help to the couple: they help them to organise dinner parties several times. In spite of the food wonderful and the service faultless, the dinner were always suck: they were no animations, no spark. In this way, Mr claver worries and asks to his butler what is wrong. This one answers that the problem is about the wine: the dinner is wonderful,yet it must be accompanied by a superb wine, and Mr Claver serves to his guest a modest wine. Mr claver is annoyed and take advices near his butler to know which are the best wine and order to him to buy all of them event though they are more that expensive.( Mr Claver is ready to to satisfy his guest). The butler answers then that he will do all he could and he achieves to get of some twenty and forty-fives. Their prices were so astronomical, that even Mr Claver began to sit up and take notice. The butler arrives to reassure him telling that with these wine, he gets a considerable social asset. Mr claver begins to interest to the subject, he read some books about it. Also, he does a deal with the butler, who learns him how taste a wine. Mr claver takes assurance and at the time of a dinner, he do notices to his guest the lewdness of the wine. Yet the guest don't take care to the talk of Mr Claver: It's like if Mr Claver didn't speak! Then he ask to the butler what is wrong. this one asks that they can't appreciate it because of the too big quantities of vinegar that Mr Straggon has put, who spoil the taste. More later in the same night, mister claver mocks his butler: he explains, in front of his butler, at his guest that his butler said that the vinegar spoil the taste. Mister claver laughs at his butler publicly. This one who can't stand that, induce a pilot. Indeed, he admits the tricks: In fact, the wine that they are drinking is not a forty-fives, it's a modest, odious, and cheap, Spanish wine. Mr Kant and Mr Staggon drinks the very expensive wine, keep the bottle and place them on the sideboard, to make believe that it was the very expensive wine, while it was a cheaper wine that they were drinking."
Tu devrais aérer ton texte, fait le à ta façon.
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème
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Mr jack has win a fist million . he want chandeg his life . He bought in london a new house for himself and his wife. he talk with rich people not the poor . He ha two men for the serve him. He a take a french man his name is Mr. Straggon, this is the chef and a english man called Kant . the help for the dinner parties, the foods are wonderful etc