Correction anglais dm

Publié le 13 nov. 2018 il y a 5A par Anonyme - Fin › 16 nov. 2018 dans 5A
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Sujet du devoir

je dois presentez un correspondant anglais pour jeudi aidez moi j’ai besoin que quelqu’un corige les fautes

il me semble que la prof ma dit d’utiliSer l’orseque je sis passer a l’oral

‭‭Monday we received a visit from an american cooresppondent in class ,he presented himself for 1 hour 

 

Her name is giberto,he was born on 1995 consequantly he is 23 year old 

He lives in a united state in oregon in prood river

 

He has already come to France ,his 3rd time 

 

He speak 3 languages french ,spanishand english

 

He speaking spanish becose his parents are mexican .He speaking spanish at home because his mother don’t speak english 

 

He lives on a farm with his family ,his father has 6 horses . He has a little sister who studies archeology and he has a brother who lives music

In his house he has dogs ,cat ,chiken




5 commentaires pour ce devoir


thomas4085
thomas4085
Posté le 13 nov. 2018

Il n'y a pas de soucis, mais je ne vois pas ton travail... si le site ne marche pas, essaie de passer par un hébergeur d'images

Anonyme
Anonyme
Posté le 14 nov. 2018

Peux tu nous mettre ton travail ?

dwd54000
dwd54000
Posté le 14 nov. 2018

Bonjour, 

dans ta première phrase : correspondent 

His name is giberto, he was born in 1995 so he is 23 years old now (je ne pense pas que consequantly marche pour cette phrase mais je peux me tromper)

He lives in the united states, Oregon, next to prood river. 

He has already come to France, (tu veux dire que c'est son 3e voyage en france ?) and it was his 3rd time.

He speaks 3 languages, french, spanish and english.

He speaks spanish because his parents are mexican. He also speaks spanish at home because his mother doesn't speak english.

( je ne comprends pas : he has a brother who lives music ? Que veux tu dire ?) 

In his house he has a cat, chiken and dogs.

Bonne soiree

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Anonyme
Anonyme
Posté le 15 nov. 2018

His name is giberto, he was born in 1995 so he is 23 years old now.

He lives in the United States, Oregon, next to Prood River. 

It is his third time in France.

He speaks 3 languages, French, Spanish and English.

He speaks Spanish because his parents are Mexicans. He also speaks Spanish at home because his mother doesn't speak English.

He lives in a farm with his family where his father owns six horses. He has a young sister who studies archeology and a brother who is a professional musician.

In his house he has a cat, chikens and dogs.

Fais attention aux majuscules 

Anonyme
Anonyme
Posté le 15 nov. 2018

Merci beaucoup :))))


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