CORRECTION DISCOURS

Sujet du devoir

bonjour,
Je dois transformer ce texte tel que ce soit comme si c'était moi qui faisait ce discours mais je ne sais pas quoi changer.Merci d'avance pour votre aide

Teachers,friends and follow classmates,i stand before you today to promote myself as a potential candidate for class president
Do you feel that your needs opinions and ideas go unnoticed?would you like to make changes around the school?Cheaper prices in the cafeteria?longer breaks between classes?less homework?well i am just th personn to voice these ideas and to get them moving.Your vote will bring the changes you want to this school.
But you may be asking,why vote for me?i a a highly reliable and responsible personn.Working as a referee forces you to make important decisions and apply the rules equally to everyone.You can count on me to carry out your plans.A vote for me is a vote for your future

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Teachers, friends and follow classmates, i stand before you today to promote myself as a potential candidate for class president.
Do you feel that your needs opinions and ideas go unnoticed? would you like to make changes around the school?best food in the canteen(car nous n'avons pas de caféteria) ? longer breaks between classes? less homework? well i am just the personn to voice these ideas and to get them moving. Your vote will bring the changes you want to this school.
But you may be asking, why vote for me? i am a highly reliable and responsible personn.I'm very motivated for this task,I will listen to you,I will be neutral and I will not pass judgment on you

Je ne sais pas quoi mettre pour la dernière parti car je n'ai jamais été délegué
Working as a referee forces you to make important decisions and apply the rules equally to everyone. You can count on me to carry out your plans. A vote for me is a vote for your future