Correction orthographe texte

Publié le 16 déc. 2015 il y a 8A par Anonyme - Fin › 18 déc. 2015 dans 8A
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Sujet du devoir

Bonjour,

Voila j'ai écris un petit texte à partir d'une compréhension oral pouvez vous me corriger les fautes svp ;)

Merci beaucoup

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

 


Alejandro Perez presents his life in the radio program « New Horizons ». First of all, he says that he is from the outskirts of Mexico City. He left his wife and his children because he wanted to find the American Dream, to give family better living conditions so he thought it was worth moving to the U.S.A. Furthermore, in Mexico it was impossible to provide family with bare necessities. Also he had a job in Mexico, he was car mechanic and his salary was 600 pesos by month that is to say 70 dollar. Contrary to the U.S.A, he could to earn 8 to 10 times more, also there were many jobs available for unskilled workers.  Besides he speaks about the life expectancy in the United States, it’s more longer indeed, people live four years older because there was better medical facilities. Last but no least, for the futur Alejandro wants that his family move to the U.S like this his son may have a better education.




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Anonyme
Posté le 16 déc. 2015

to give his family 

to provide for his family

600 pesons that is about 70 dollars

 

Bravo a toi, c'est bien écrit!

Anonyme
Posté le 17 déc. 2015

he was a mechanic suffit 

 


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