Correction texte Anglais

Publié le 11 févr. 2018 il y a 6A par M.A - Fin › 14 févr. 2018 dans 6A
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Sujet du devoir

Bonjour, je dois présenter un film en Anglais et également donner mon avis. J'ai donc choisi Demain tout commence (en Anglais: Two Is Family). J'ai déjà rédigé mon avis. Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait me corriger les fautes d'orthographes, de grammaire et même de sens si cela est nécessaire. Merci d'avance.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

En Anglais:

I appreciated a lot this movie. I found him fascinating. Furthermore it's the rare movie in feelings that clears also certain charm.

As far as I'm concerned, I liked well the moving story between the girl and his father. It's a soft relation full of humor and complicity.

I could qualify this movie of a masterpiece first of all by its emotional impact.
Besides, there is numerous events and new developments.
I think that this movie makes us several messages pass.
I agree on the fact that this movie manages to make the public of the laughter pass in tears.

From my point of view, I find that the presence of the girl Gloria gives a certain sincerity as well as a tenderness to this story. Indeed, alive and kicking and of mockery, small Gloria hangs on the look and seduces straightaway.

Omar Sy is a character that I loved well by his humor, he is also brave and very charming in the skin of the immature father however this one evolves constantly in the course of the story.

In my opinion, the presence of young actors brings a certain freshness to the French comedy.

I less liked certain scenes which reveal the dramatic side of the story, the judicial battle between both parents of which seemed to be already in itself the most delicate side of the movie.
I consider that beyond these remarks, Hugo Gélin knew how to ask the good questions on the paternity and his stakes.
Consequently it is a good essential point for this family comedy.

I must admit that the realization and the direction are just excellent, she is dynamic and very colored. Furthermore, a big part of scenes is turned in London.

In conclusion, I think that Two is family is a magnificent comedy drama which reaches the passage to give a beautiful lesson of life.

En Français (si besoin):

J'ai beaucoup apprécié ce film. Je l'ai trouvé passionnant. De plus c'est un film rare en émotions qui dégage aussi un certain charme.

En ce qui me concerne, j'ai bien aimé l'histoire émouvante entre la petite fille et son père. C'est une relation tendre pleine d'humour et de complicité.

Je pourrais qualifier ce film d'un chef-d’œuvre tout d'abord par son impact émotionnel.
Par ailleurs, il y a de nombreuses péripéties et de rebondissements.
Je pense que ce film nous fait passer plusieurs messages.
Je suis d'accord sur le fait que ce film arrive à faire passer le public du rire aux larmes.

De mon point de vue, je trouve que la présence de la petite fille Gloria donne une certaine sincérité ainsi que de la tendresse à cette histoire. En effet, pleine de vie et de malice, la petite Gloria accroche le regard et séduit d'emblée.

Omar Sy est un personnage que j'ai bien aimé par son humour, il est également courageux et fort attachant dans la peau du père immature cependant celui-ci évolue constamment au fil de l'histoire.

A mon avis, la présence de jeunes acteurs apporte une certaine fraîcheur à la comédie française.

J'ai moins aimé certaines scènes qui font apparaitre le côté dramatique de l'histoire, dont la bataille judiciaire entre les deux parents semblait déjà être en soi le côté le plus délicat du film.
Je considère que au-delà de ces remarques, Hugo Gélin a su poser les bonnes questions sur la paternité et ses enjeux.
Par conséquent c'est un bon point essentiel pour cette comédie familiale.

Je dois admettre que la réalisation et la mise en scène sont juste excellentes, elle est dynamique et très colorée. De plus, une grande partie des scènes est tournée à Londres.

En conclusion, Je pense que Demain Tout Commence est une magnifique comédie dramatique qui parvient au passage à donner une belle leçon de vie.




3 commentaires pour ce devoir


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Anonyme
Posté le 11 févr. 2018

Tout d'abord je te conseille de présenter le film en quelques lignes du genre The movie I am going to talk about is called "Two is a Family", its a 2016 French comedy-drama film remake of "Instructions Not Included'', directed by Hugo Gélin and starring Omar Sy. I tells the sorty about ...( tu résumes vite fait de quoi il parle).

Ensuite j'ai essayé de corrigé un peu, je t'ai mis en gras les corrections: I really enjoyed this movie because I found it fascinating.

I really enjoyed (...) happening(...).

(...)  and the fact that they have (...).

(...) as a masterpiece (...) because of its emotional impact.

Moreover, there are many twists and turns.I think that this movie wants to transmit to us several messages.

(...) the audience go from laugh to tears.

(...) little girl named Gloria (...)

(..)full of life and mischief, the little Gloria catches the eye and seduced us from the start.

(...) I loved so much because of(...) playing the role (...)

I did not like (...) including the legal battle between the two parents that already seemed to be (...), (...)Hugo Gélin was able to ask the right questions about paternity and its stakes.

Therefore (...) and the staging(...) it is dynamic and very colorful.

Furthermore, a large part/ was shot/ is a wonderful dramatic comedy that manages to give a beautiful lesson of life.

M.A
M.A
Posté le 11 févr. 2018

Merci beaucoup de ton aide !

HYG
HYG
Posté le 13 févr. 2018

I appreciated a lot this film. I thought he was exciting. Furthermore it is a rare film in emotions that also clears some charm.

Personally speaking, I really liked moving history between the small daughter and her father. It is a loving relation full of humour and complicity.

I could qualify this film of a leader - of work first of all by its emotional impact.
Moreover, there are many events and rebounds.
I think that this film gets us several messages.
I agree on the fact that this film succeeds in getting the public of the laugh in tears.

From my point of view, I find that the presence of the small girl Gloria gives some sincerity as well as of tenderness in this history. Indeed, lively and of mischief, small Gloria catches look and entices straightaway.

Omar Sy is a character whom I really loved by his humour, he is also audacious and very much engaging in the skin of the childish father however this one always evolves in the course of history.

In my opinion, the presence of young actors brings some freshness in the French comedy.

I less liked some stages which make apparaitre the dramatic side of history, the judicial battle of which between both parents has already seemed to be in itself the most delicate side of the film.
I consider that beyond these comments, Hugo Gélin could ask good questions on fatherhood and his stakes.
As a result it is a good key point for this family comedy.

I must suppose that realisation and production are just very good, she is dynamic and very coloured. Besides, a lot of stages is turned in London.

In conclusion, I think that Tomorrow Everything Begins a splendid comedy drama is which reaches passage to give a nice lesson of life.

 

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