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Sujet : Décrire et analyser l'image suivante
http://www.ny-photos.com/images/cw/times_square_53.JPG
Aide : Parler des couleurs, de la lumière, du mouvement, des personnages, des formes. On peut aussi dire : "at the top left- hand corner", "at the top", "the middle", "the focus", "the bottom", " at the bottom left hand corner" , " left hand side", the right hand side" ....
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This document is a photo.
The scene takes place in Time Square , a famous district in New York. There are a lot of advertisements, tourists buses and cars.
There is a great representation of different people living or visiting this center of the world.
We can see many people in the foreground. Two young individuals with a red tee-shirt are crossing the street while talking about . On their right, an older man with glasses wears a light blue shirt and a black trousers, he seems to be in a hurry. Maybe he works in a office. Behind them, a black car allows a father and his baby to cross the street. The father wears short pants therefore we can think that the weather is fine. We can see in the foreground the face of a young asian woman in profile.
A red bus runs on the roadway. It transports tourists who want visit New York. The “New York Sightseeing” buses are specialists in this field.
In the foreground we can distinguish taxis , well-known for their yellow colour and a red traffic light.
In the background we can see that there are traffic jam.
The skyscrapers are omnipresent in the background, they are everywhere in the city. We can also see the buildings.
American technology can be felt through the many advertisements : photography, music, camera, cinema... of multinational corporations as Kodak, Maxell and Planet Hollywood adorning the Time Square walls. The Planet Hollywood indicates that we observe a famous street.
In conclusion, Time Square is a modern district in New York City . That photograph perfectly illustrates the American life and the present world.
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There is a diversity of people living or visiting this famous place. Two young individuals with a red tee-shirt are crossing the street while having a conversation. an older man with glasses is wearing a light blue shirt and a black trousers
Maybe he is working in an office nearby. Behind them, a black car let a father and his baby cross the street. The father is wearing short pants therefore we can assume that the weather is nice . in the foreground We can see the profile of a young Asian woman.
A red bus is running on the roadway. It is carrying tourists who want to visit New York. The “New York Sightseeing” buses are made for this.
In the background we can see that there is some traffic jam.
skyscrapers are omnipresent in the background, they are everywhere in the city. We can also see buildings.
American technology is displayed in many advertisements : photography, music, camera, cinema... of multinational corporations like Kodak, Maxell and Planet Hollywood on the Time Square walls. Planet Hollywood shows that we are certainly on a famous street.
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