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Voila c'que je vien de faire :)

Hyderabad, an Indian city, is the capital of Andhra Pradesh. This city was born of a water shortage. The Nizam of Hyderabad. Osman Ali Khan began by wanting to go to Pakistan, but eventually integrate India. There are about 3,5 million people who live there today, most of who are very poor. It is very busy but it is also the largest city in this state, but they’re have any housing problem despite the strong development of it. It has international airport serving Amsterdam, Bubai, Singapore and everywhere else is in this city. It plans to build new airport.
In Hyberabad we find a little area that we call Cyberabad because it is a place of technology, computers, export and sale. We find some companies like Microsoft international (technical society U.S. multinational). This is a very modern, attractive city for foreign investors because of new discovery of its researchers. We perceive little of the road from Hyderabad Cyberabad, banks and cyber cafes. This is a positive for the city because of the universities, because in this city there is more than ten thousand students who are trying to learn English. It is therefore easier to talk with people of this city, as English became the language international.
The environment of Hyderabad is very nice. This is a nice town where you can walk along the Musi river where we perceive a little modern center. There have also an artificial lake, or they just swim safely. One can visit the parks and the old town with its ancient monuments. In summer, temperatures can become very high, it is an almost unbearable heat.
In conclusion, the city is very nice, and thanks to its ancient city, it attracts tourists. But there is a very hot climate in summer. International language is English, so it is easy to communicate with the people. I imagine that going down the structure implemented, could help us in growing our business.