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Publié le 26 déc. 2015 il y a 8A par Anonyme - Fin › 29 déc. 2015 dans 8A
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Sujet du devoir


- Hello, good afternoon , this is anne-laure talking live from Sierra leone in africa on  CNN. Today Ismaêl beah is with me and it is a great honor to the children.

- Hello ismael how are you ?

- I m fine thank you very much !

- nothing Let's go ! What is the major disaster in sierra leone ?

- The major disaster in sierra leone is the war that is affecting the children.

- How old are you when it happened ?

- I had 12 years old

- hum ! and what are the consequences for the children ?

- First , the war forces the children to run away from their homes. And the children have lose their families and aimlessly room the forests . It's very horrible !

- Yes , it's also very sad ! and what are the children role in the conflict ?

- Hum ! The children get involved in the conflict as soldiers , carriers of loads and a many other difficult tasks .

- Why have you joined the army ?

- First I joined the army because of the loss of my family and starvation. Then I wanted to avenge the deaths of my family and I had to get some food to survive and the only way to do that was to be part of army.

- what major change in your life ?

- The people think than I am a soldier anymore .

- What is the new cause ?

- always the war sadly

- It's finish thank you very much

- your welcome

- bye !

- bye !

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Je doit faire une interview sur Ismaël Beah. Voici ce que j'ai fait mais il y a certaine phrase que je ne suis pas sur. Pouvez vous me dire si cela est correcte merci beaucoup d'avance !




1 commentaire pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 29 déc. 2015

Le dialogue est un peu ennuyeux mais il est correct juste au lieu de "- hum ! and what are the consequences for the children ?"

Je pense que se serait mieux de dire : " you had 12 old when this happens, it must have been hard ! and what are the consequences for the children ?" mais sinon pour ma part il est assez correct ! :) 

J'espère avoir pu t'aider :D 

Bon courage 


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