Est ce que vous pouvais verifier ce que j'ai fait SVP

Publié le 24 avr. 2010 il y a 14A par Anonyme - Fin › 26 avr. 2010 dans 14A
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Bonjour , je dois imaginer une dispute avec mes parents ( bien sur, ce n'est pas vrai ) , en anglais . Voici ce que j'ai fait pourriez vous me corriger des choses , et me traduire les deux derniers courte phrases .
MErci beaucoup à la personne qui va m'aider .

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Me : Mum !
Mme X : Wait !
Me : Mum - are you listening to me ?
Mum : Yes , yes ... What ?
Me : Id , like to go to a party sunday wiith my friends ?
Mum : (ah ah ah )
me : May I ?
Mum : That's out of the questions !
Me : Why Mum ?
Mum : because I'm decide !
Me : That's not fair ! Furthermore you had said that I could go out during the weekend .
Mum :Yes , but not to the parties ! And moreover , you have nothing better to do ! for example , you shall can working .
Me : But , I have finished all my homework for the weekend .... You not keep your promises!
Mum : Is this a criticism? I'am Your mother , change your tone , will you !
And moreover , what do you gain from to the party ?
Me : Juste for be with my friends and to enjoy myself.
Mum : Stop arguing , will you ? ....( silence ) I'm sure that is a party of that sort where are those people who are quite strange , and you must no approach these people , they are not a good company .
Me : Anyway , for you nobody is a good company !
Mum : Yes , my darling ...
Me : Couldn't imagine of an ordinary evening with friends ?
Mum : No !
Me : Have you never been young ! anyway , you on't let me go out .Because of you , i'm not existing for all the others !
Mum : But no , don't worry !
Me : Daddy , help me !
Dad : Is your mother who decide . So , no !
Me :Mum ,Dad , why are you harsh with me ? Kimberly's parents aren't as mush hard with her .
Dad , Mum :Nous ne somme pas les parents de Kimberly . Et puis, ce sera non ! Monte dans ta chambre --- à traduire SVP
Me : I Hate you !



6 commentaires pour ce devoir


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Anonyme
Posté le 24 avr. 2010
Bonjour,

je reprend ton texte et je le corrige.

je te le poste plus tard dans la soirée (là c'est soirée télé!).
Anonyme
Posté le 24 avr. 2010
que voulait tu dire par"mum-are you listenning to me"traduis pour moi stp
Anonyme
Posté le 24 avr. 2010
Klone ;
Elle a voulu dire
M'écoutes tu ?
Anonyme
Posté le 24 avr. 2010
hop, la correction est en majuscules:

Me : Mum !
Mme X : Wait !
Me : Mum - are you listening to me ?
Mum : Yes , yes ... What ?
Me : I'D like to go to a party sunday with my friends?
Mum : (ah ah ah )
me : May I ?
Mum : That's out of question!
Me : Why Mum ?
Mum : Because THE ONE TO decide IS ME!
Me : That's not fair ! Furthermore you said that I could go out during the weekend .
Mum :Yes , but not to parties ! And moreover , DON'T you have thingS better to do? WORKING, PERHAPS .
Me : But I have finished all my homework for NEXT WEEK .... You DON'T keep your promises!
Mum : Is this a criticism? I'am your mother, change your tone, will you ! BESIDES, WHY DO YOU WANT TO GO TO THAT PARTY?
Me : I JUST WANT TO be with my friends and to enjoy myself.
Mum : Stop arguing , will you ? ....( silence ) I'm sure that IN THIS KIND OF party THERE are STRANGE people WHICH you must NOT approach, they are BAD company .
Me : Anyway , for you nobody is good ENOUGH FOR ME!
Mum : Yes , darling ...
Me : YOU CAN'T THINK OF an ordinary evening with friends, CAN YOU?
Mum : No.
Me : Have you never been young? Anyway , you WON'T let me go out. Because of you , I DON'T EXIST IN FRONT OF OTHERS!
Mum : OF COURSE NOT, don't worry !
Me : Daddy , help me !
Dad : Your mother IS THE ONE TO decide. So, I WON'T.
Me : Mum ,Dad , why are you SO harsh with me ? Kimberly's parents aren't as hard with her.
Dad, Mum : WE ARE NOT KIMBERLY'S PARENTS BUT YOURS. MY ANSWER IS NO AND THAT'S FINAL! GO UP TO YOUR ROOM.
Me : I hate you !


Voilà pour le texte avec les deux dernières phrases traduites.
Anonyme
Posté le 25 avr. 2010
Maman , tu m'écoute
Anonyme
Posté le 25 avr. 2010
Je te remercie Cenedra .
Je te rajoute des points !

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