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Voici mon texte :The picture is a painting called "Tornado over kansas". It was painted by the painter John Stewart Curry.
Wee can see a family of farmer, a man and his wife who flee of their farm with their children and their animals because there are a tornado who approaches them.
The family is composed of the mother, the father, their two son, their little daughter and their baby. Their pets are a dog, a puppies and a cat. In the farm they have chicken and goats.
The wife have in her arms a baby, the father takes the hand of her daughter,a boy have in her arms the puppies and the other boy have in her arms the cat. There are their dog who follow them.
As can be see, the man and his two boys wear a shirt whith a overalls.
The women wears a dress and her baby is in a blanket. The girl wears a nightdress.
The landscape is the campaign. There are the grass, tree, the huts, the nature, the animals and the tornado in the distance.
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The scene takes place on a farm. In the foreground, we can see a family. They are the parents along with two boys, a girl and a baby. The father seems to tell his son to hurry up. They are trying to escape. The mother seems to be worried. She is holding her baby in her arms. The baby is wrapped in a blanket.
One of the boys is holding a black cat in his arms. The cat is scared and wants to run away. The other boy is holding two brown puppies. He is following his dad. There is also a chicken next to the boy. In the background, we can see the sky. The sky is black and blue. A tornado is approaching the house.
The yarn is made of wood and cannot resist the tornado. This is certainly the reason why the family is trying to run away. They are trying to find a shelter somewhere.
The clothes of the father and the mother let me think that the scene takes place a long time ago, maybe early 1900.
It is in Kansas. The State is very familiar with tornados.
In this painting, Stewart described a scene of his life. The farm is supposed to be the farm of his parents. As a child, he was used to tornados in Kansas. The landscape is very beautiful and agricultural. It also highlights the living conditions of farmers.
One of the boys is holding a black cat in his arms. The cat is scared and wants to run away. The other boy is holding two brown puppies. He is following his dad. There is also a chicken next to the boy. In the background, we can see the sky. The sky is black and blue. A tornado is approaching the house.
The yarn is made of wood and cannot resist the tornado. This is certainly the reason why the family is trying to run away. They are trying to find a shelter somewhere.
The clothes of the father and the mother let me think that the scene takes place a long time ago, maybe early 1900.
It is in Kansas. The State is very familiar with tornados.
In this painting, Stewart described a scene of his life. The farm is supposed to be the farm of his parents. As a child, he was used to tornados in Kansas. The landscape is very beautiful and agricultural. It also highlights the living conditions of farmers.
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Wee can see a farmer family a man and his wife who are running away from their farm along with their children and their animals because there is a tornado approaching their farm.
The family is made of the mother, the father, their two sons, their little daughter and their baby. Their pets are a dog, a puppy and a cat. In the farm they have chicken and goats.
The wife is holding a baby in her arms , the father is holding the hand of his daughter,a boy is holding the puppy in his arms and the other boy has the cat in his arms. There is their dog following them.
In addition, the man and his two boys are wearing a shirt with the overall
The woman is wearing a dress and her baby is wrapped in a blanket. The girl is wearing a nightdress.