Oral d'anglais

Sujet du devoir

Bonjour bonjour,

demain je passe un oral d'anglais et j'ai quelques doutes en ce qui concerne la justesse grammaticale de mon texte, est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait regarder s'il y a des fautes svp ? Merci beaucoup !

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

The document is a black and white photograph from the film « The birds ».
This film was made in 1963 by Alfred Hichtcock who is a very famous suspence-film director.
The characters are three girls, two child and a woman.
They may be the woman's daughter. Indeed she is taller than the girls on each of the sides.
As we see the sky, behind the characters, we can say the scene must take place outside. (because maybe it's in a shooting room)
The scene must be take place in the early sixties because the woman is wearing high-waisted pants or it's might be a skirt, we can see very-well, which was fashionable in the sixties.

In the foreground, there are birds, they look like crows.
These crows seems want to attak them as a consequence they are running in order to escape from this threat and to protect themself. Maybe they began to run several hours ago.
The child must be terrified however the woman doesn't seem to be affraid.
She may has already seen these birds before and she thinks they don't want to kill them
On the contrary, the crows might be flying to escape from a threat too. It's unlikely but  there might be a killer with a rife who shoot at everything that moves, even the animales.
They must have been sitting on one of the benches in the street before the danger appears. As for the birds, maybe they was eating breadcrumbs in front of a bakery.
While watching this photograph, we get the impression it's the end of the world.

Now, I'm going to present the film, Billy Elliot.

Billy Elliot is a British comedy drama made by Stephen Dadry in 2000.
This film talk about a young eleven-year-old boy, Billy Eliott who lives in Durham, in the North-Est of England with his widowed father, Jackie, and his older brother, Tony, both coal miners out on strike and also his invalid grandmother, who once aspired to be a professional dancer in Durham. Billy's father sends him to the gym to learn boxing, but Billy dislikes this sport. One day, he discovered with surprise a dance clase shared the same premises that his boxing club. That's why, without his father knows it, His teacher feeling in him a real potential and says he may become a big dancer and study at the Royal Ballet School in London. However when Billy was dancing in his bedroom, his father sees him and he forbids Billy to take any more ballet, an activity reserved for girls according to his close relatives.Later, Jackie catches Billy dancing in the gym and realises his son is truly gifted; he will do whatever it takes to help Billy attain his dream.

The film's final scene is set fourteen years later (approximately 1999): the mature Billy takes the stage to perform the lead in Matthew Bourne's Swan Lake, as Jackie, Tony, and Michael watch in the audience. he is the principal dancer and he became a famous dancer.
My favourite scene is when Billy pass the audition to enter in the Royal Ballet School because just before to present his choregraphy Billy was in a fight with an other boy which is rather funny from a dancer. (Because the boy had said to Billy he was a terrible dancer)

I love this film because the story is very touching, it overwhelms and makes happy. What's more, I find the passion for dance is very well represented
The morality of this film is we must believe in its dreams.
The acting is of very hight quality.