Prise de parole " The ideal school"

Sujet du devoir

Faire 1'30 sur le sujet thème en exprimant, selon nous quel serait l'école idéal. EN utilisant " I wish " ou encore " if i was the director "

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Voilà, j'ai fait un travail qui dur 1'30 ( j'ai pris en compte les hésitations que je vais avoir ). Pouriez vous, s'il vous plaît me corriger si j'ai des fautes et mes dire comment y remédier ?

If i was the director, i wish the school will be bigger

i wish a big swimming pool was in the playground ( cour de récréation ) and that the studients could take a bath in the breaks.

In the ideal school, the food in the canteen must be delicious and cheep^.
I wish there was less homework and they are easier.

If i was the director, nobody was fighting, everybody was friends, and the goodstudient helped the bad studients for they homework.

I wish the school was a huge brotherhood

If i was the director, i would built a gymnasium and a football ground.

I wish the people weren't juged by their skin, but by the content of their character.

And there were a long break between two lectures ( cours ).

I wish, nobody had detention( heure de colle ), and there are just two assessment in a week ( deux contrôles par semaines).


Voilà merci a ceux qui voudront bien m'aider...