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PS: Il tarite de Super size me
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Super size me is an American documentary film written and directed by Morgan Spurlock. It was lasted over 30 days, during that time, spurlock eat at McDonals restaurant 3 times per day.
It means ordering the biggest portion on human you. He gain over 11 Kg.He also experience mood swings, sexual disfonction and liver damage. It toom him 14 month to lose all the weight he took. For the film can be made, he had:
-to consume 3 MacDonals meals per day; (je sais pas si j'ai besoin de le redire)
-the sample every higher Mc Donals human you at list once over the course of the 30 days
--the super size's meal if and only eaf he was hast
-to walk as much as tipicle american, that is about 5 thousand calories per day
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