Rédaction anglais : "My Ideal City" : Besoin d'une correction.

Sujet du devoir

Je dois décrire ma ville "idéale", en utilisant beaucoup de conditionnel et de préposition comme inside, near, among...
J'aurais besoin que quelqu'un me corrige mes sûrement très nombreuses fautes s'il vous plait ^^
(Et en même temps, pourriez-vous me dire si, d'après vous, j'ai assez mis de conditionnel et de préposition ?)

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

My ideal city would be located near the sea. Beaches would be along numerous cliffs. The sea would be smooth, what makes that we could go for a swim and bathe without danger. The climate would always be bright and sunny, but not too sultry : there wouldn't be dog days.
My ideal city would have to been always lively : it might be like New York : she would never sleep. It would be a good place for young people and all persons who would want to have fun; thanks to the pubs, bars, night clubs, etc, which are next to the stadium, the theatre, the cinema, etc. But if you wanted silence and quiet, you might go to the quiet part of the city : we would can find many prestigious schools, which would be free for all the levels. Near to schools, there would be a library, opposite to the museum.
There would be a big field of soccer and rugby inside a big track, with free access for all; where the inhabitants might do sport freely.
Close to the track, there would be a big skate-park where many teenagers would can have fun with their friends.
There would be too many shops and many beautiful structure which we would can visited freely.
My ideal city would be too unpolluted : all would be environment-friendly. There would be many green areas inside my city, with many plants ans trees everywhere; where the inhabitants could relax after a hard working day or just have a good time. The pedestrians could also go for a stroll along the numerous lanes and paths accross the forest, among birds and many animals which would live inside.
In my city, there wouln't be litter on the ground, all the inhabitants would be respectful of the planet.
Among the inhabitants, all the persons would be behind with the others and be nice. There would be a good atmosphere, even between neighbours.
In my ideal city, there would have no violence, no racism and no discrimination.
There would be too not unemployement and all the inhabitants would be happy.