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WHAT KIND OF RELATIONSHIP DO YOU HAVE WITH YOUR PARENTS?Bonsoir, pouvez-vous me corriger les fautes de cette rédaction. Merci.
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"I have good relationships with my parents. My father is nice and generous and my mother is strict but funny. They don't get that angry if I do something wrong. The only thing is that they're overprotective; they won’t let me out too late. My mother is more understanding than my father. I can trust to my mother because she is cool. I respect my parents because they are nice and not boring. My parents let me socialize and have a teenage life but they won't let me have a pet.As a conclusion, my parents are nice and funny."
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"I have good relationships with my parents. My father is nice and generous and my mother is strict but funny. They don't get that angry if I do something wrong. The only thing is that they're overprotective; they won’t let me out too late. My mother is more understanding than my father. I can trust my mother because she is cool. I respect my parents because they are nice and not boring. My parents let me socialise and have a teenage life but they won't let me have a pet.
As a conclusion, my parents are nice and funny."
Juste quelques erreurs pas trop grave, socialiSe et non sacialiZe. ^^
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème