Une biographie en anglais

Sujet du devoir

Bonjour, je dois écrire un texte sur la Reine d'Angleterre Victoria qui est morte. Je devrais réciter ce texte lundi devant ma prof donc je voudrais que vous me le corrigiez :) Merci d'avance !

Et aussi, comment commencer mon texte? Elle a dit qu'il faut une introduction d'abord.. Mais je n'ai pas d'idée.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Alexandrina Victoria was born on twenty-four of May 1819 at 4.15 a.m at Kensington Palace in London. Her nickname was "the grandmother of Europ". She was christened privately on June twenty-four 1819 in the cuppola room at Kensington Palace. She was only child (daughter?). Victoria's father was Prince Edward, dike of Kent and Strathearn, the fourth son of Georges 3. Victoria's mother was Princess Victoria of Saxe-Cobourg-Saalfeld. Victoria's father died when she was one years old. Alexandrina Victoria was the queen of United Kingdom and Empress of Ireland. The queen "Victoria" fell in love with her cousin Albert at the age of sixteen yeard old. She proposed to him marriage and he agreed. They were married on February the 10, 1840 in the Chapel Royal of St James Palace, in London. The first pregnancy of Victoria was at the age of 18. Her daughter, also named Victoria, was born on twenty-one November 1840. She hated being pregnant, she thought it disguting. But over the folowwing seventeen yeard, she and Albert had eight other children: Albert, Helena, Louise, Arthur, Leopold and Beatrice. Unfortunately, his husband, Albert died on December the 14, 1861. Victoria was very sad. In the first few months of the marriage, a man, Edward attempted to assassinate her but she had nothing. She died on Tuesday, twenty-two January 1901 at half past six in the evening at the age of 81 years old.