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The fortune cookie is a small cake of Asian origin. It is a dry cake containing inside a small paper on which is written a message: "if you never accept losing you will not win ever" or "you'll have a long and happy life."
It is usually found in restaurants.
It consists of ...


This cupcake is more fun than good. It can send a nice message, funny or sobering to people coming into a restaurant. It is light enough despite many rich ingredients.

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(C'est l'analyse d'emballage provenant d'Angleterre)