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Bonjour,pour jeudi prochain, je dois faire une biographie ecrite en anglais sur john boyd dunlop : la voici en francais:
Il naît dans une ferme à Dreghorn, dans le comté de North Ayrshire, en Ecosse le Samedi 5 février 1840. Il fait ensuite des études de chirurgien vétérinaire à l’Université d'Édimbourg puis exercera cette profession pendant près de dix ans chez lui, avant de partir pour Belfast, en Irlande, en 1867.
En 1887, John Boyd Dunlop sans connaître paraît-il l'invention de W. Thomson, ( invente le premier pneumatique à partir de bandage en caoutchouc collé sur une jante,mais il abandonne son brevet de « roue à air ») a l’idée d'entourer les roues en bois de la bicyclette de son fils avec des tubes en caoutchouc remplis d'air afin d’en améliorer le confort, le bruit, la vitesse et l'adhérence sur route.
Son pneumatique a un succès immédiat dans le monde du vélo, les grands champions de l’époque l’utilisent avec succès. John Boyd Dunlop dépose le brevet du pneu à air avec valve le 7 décembre 1888. Mais l'invention de Dunlop ne permet pas une réparation facile en cas de crevaison.
En 1981 andré et edouard michelin invente le premier pneumatique démontable avec chambre à aire.
Dunlop cède son brevet à William Harvey Du Cros contre 1 500 parts de la compagnie nouvellement créée. Il n'aura pas fait grande fortune de son invention. Il meurt le lundi 23 Octobre 1921 à l'age de 81 ans à Dublin.
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voila je l'ai traduis en anglais :He was born on a farm at Dreghorn, in the county of North Ayrshire, Scotland Saturday, 5 February 1840. He then studied veterinary surgeon at the University of Edinburgh and then exercise the profession for almost ten years at home before leaving for Belfast, Ireland, 1867.
In 1887, John Boyd Dunlop without knowing it seems the invention of W. Thomson (invented the first tire from tire rubber glued to a rim, but he abandoned his patent "wheel air") to the idea of surrounding the wooden wheels of the bicycle of his son with tubes rubber filled with air to improve comfort, noise, speed and road grip.
His tire was an instant success in the world of cycling, the great champions of the time using it successfully. John Boyd Dunlop patents the tire air valve with December 7, 1888. But Dunlop's invention does not allow for easy repair in case of puncture.
In 1981 Andre and Edouard Michelin invented the first removable tire with inner area.
Dunlop sold his patent to William Harvey Du Cros cons 1500 shares of the newly created company. It has not made a great fortune from his invention. He died Monday, October 23, 1921 at the age of 81 years in Dublin.
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Il n'y a pas énormément de fautes dans ton texte :)
Voici une correction :
"He was born on a farm at Dreghorn, in the county of North Ayrshire, Scotland Saturday, 5th of February 1840. He then studied to become a veterinary surgeon at the University of Edinburgh and then exercise the profession for almost ten years at home before leaving for Belfast, Ireland, 1867.
In 1887, John Boyd Dunlop without knowing it seems the invention of W. Thomson (invented the first tyre from rubber tyre glued to a rim, but he abandoned his patent "air wheel") to the idea of surrounding the wooden wheels of the bicycle of his son with tubes rubber filled with air to improve comfort, noise, speed and road grip.
His tyre was an instant success in the world of cycling, the great champions of the time using it successfully. John Boyd Dunlop patents the air tyre valve on December 7th, 1888. But Dunlop's invention does not allow for easy repair in case of puncture.
In 1981 Andre and Edouard Michelin invented the first removable tyre with inner area.
Dunlop sold his patent to William Harvey Du Cros with 1500 shares of the newly created company. It has not made a great fortune from his invention. He died Monday, October 23rd, 1921 at the age of 81 years in Dublin."
Voici une correction :
"He was born on a farm at Dreghorn, in the county of North Ayrshire, Scotland Saturday, 5th of February 1840. He then studied to become a veterinary surgeon at the University of Edinburgh and then exercise the profession for almost ten years at home before leaving for Belfast, Ireland, 1867.
In 1887, John Boyd Dunlop without knowing it seems the invention of W. Thomson (invented the first tyre from rubber tyre glued to a rim, but he abandoned his patent "air wheel") to the idea of surrounding the wooden wheels of the bicycle of his son with tubes rubber filled with air to improve comfort, noise, speed and road grip.
His tyre was an instant success in the world of cycling, the great champions of the time using it successfully. John Boyd Dunlop patents the air tyre valve on December 7th, 1888. But Dunlop's invention does not allow for easy repair in case of puncture.
In 1981 Andre and Edouard Michelin invented the first removable tyre with inner area.
Dunlop sold his patent to William Harvey Du Cros with 1500 shares of the newly created company. It has not made a great fortune from his invention. He died Monday, October 23rd, 1921 at the age of 81 years in Dublin."
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"He was born on a farm at Dreghorn, in the county of North Ayrshire, Scotland Saturday, 5th of February 1840. He then studied to become a veterinary surgeon at the University of Edinburgh and then exercise the profession for almost ten years at home before leaving for Belfast, Ireland, 1867.
In 1887, John Boyd Dunlop without knowing it seems the invention of W. Thomson (invented the first tyre from rubber tyre glued to a rim, but he abandoned his patent "air wheel") to the idea of surrounding the wooden wheels of the bicycle of his son with tubes rubber filled with air to improve comfort, noise, speed and road grip.
His tyre was an instant success in the world of cycling, the great champions of the time using it successfully. John Boyd Dunlop patents the air tyre valve on December 7th, 1888. But Dunlop's invention does not allow for easy repair in case of puncture.
In 1981 Andre and Edouard Michelin invented the first removable tyre with inner area.
Dunlop sold his patent to William Harvey Du Cros with 1500 shares of the newly created company. It has not made a great fortune from his invention. He died Monday, October 23rd, 1921 at the age of 81 years in Dublin."
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème