Ce n'est pas vraiment un exercice

Publié le 3 nov. 2011 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 10 nov. 2011 dans 12A
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Sujet du devoir

Sue is an doctor english of 36 years old.She is married and have " childrens .She is living in London.
Sue used to pratice sport like swimming ,playing basket-ball and tennis but today she doesn't pratice sport any more because she became hadicapped of legs because of a accident.She used to go camped during the holidays but today she doesn't like go camped any more because she prefers the hotel ,it's morecomfortable than camped.Sue used to smoke because of her studies but today she doesn't smoke any more because she realized that smoking washed her life.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît
mercii d'avance pour votre aide!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



4 commentaires pour ce devoir


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Anonyme
Posté le 3 nov. 2011
Sue is an english* doctor .... have children*
Practice ... Practice * like --> mieux vaut dire 'as' (Sue used to practice sport as swimming...)
Handiccaped
Like --> 'as'
More comfortable*
Anonyme
Posté le 3 nov. 2011
Sue is a 36-year old English doctor.She is married and has children .She lives in London.
Sue used to pratice sport such as swimming ,playing basket-ball and tennis but today she can't do it any more because she is leg disabled follwing an accident.She used to go camping during holidays but today she doesn't like to do it any more because she prefers the hotel ,it's more comfortable than camping.Sue used to smoke because of her studies but today she doesn't do it anymore because she found out that smoking wasted her life.

Anonyme
Posté le 3 nov. 2011
mercii pour ton aide
Anonyme
Posté le 3 nov. 2011
merci pour ton aide

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