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Bonjour je dois faire un commentaire sur la chanson "Another day in paradise" de 500 mots , j'ai plus du tout d'idée, donc si vous pouviez m'aider, et me dire si il y'a des fautes, merci.Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Another day in paradise is a song which has been written by Phil collins in 1989 in this song , Phil Collins tells the story of a homeless woman, as if he was a spectator of the scene , he describes what he sees. By this story he sensitizes those who listen to the problems of bums. He takes a specific case instead of making a generality, in order to reinforce his words , because its stronger when you talk about one person. In his chorus " Oh think twice it's juste another day for you and me in paradise" he tries to make us understand that we live in a paradise , and we behave as if it was normal , we take things for grounded. he tries to make us realize that we are privileged over all those people who live on the street , and that we don't realize enough how lucky we are1 commentaire pour ce devoir
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j'ai déjà traité ce sujet là en classe, notre professeur nous avai seulement demander de presenter, de parler du texte à l'oral, donc je pense que je peut facilement t'aider! enfin...j'espere ^^ alors voilà ce que moi j'avais dit :
"this document is a song written by phill collins and it's entitled an other day in paradise. this one is divided into 4 stenzas and on chorus repeated many times.
the song is about a homeless. the scene takes place in a street or maybe in a big city like New York,during winter because she says "it's cold" and early in the morning or late in the evening. there are two characters; a man and a woman. the woman is homeless and she looks older than she is, she has got lines on her face because she's exhausted, she's weak and dirty... there she's looking for a shelter for the night because she has nowhere to sleep and she's jobless so she can't pay the rent for a house. that's why, she's imploring the man to help her. for exemple she'd like him to feed, to let her wash herself so to take her at home. or just to tell her a place where she could go and sleep... we can supose the man is a buisness man. when he crosses the street he strated to whistle: he pretend he can't hear the woman. we can see that he seems embarassed to be there! so, he just walks on, doesn't look back and let the woman on the street..."
voila :) j'espère que ça pourra t'aider un peu... j'ai trouver ton paragraphe très interessant donc je te conseil de faire un mélange des 2 et je pense que ca sera suffisant !
bon courage