Correction de texte

Publié le 16 déc. 2019 il y a 4A par laeti0309 - Fin › 20 déc. 2019 dans 4A
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Sujet du devoir

je voudrais savoir si tout est ok ou sinon me corrigé en me disant ou se trouve la faute que je puisse correctement corriger ce texte.
Merci à toutes les personnes qui m'aiderons.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir


I/ Introduction
The picture is a cartoon. Whe don't know when it was published. It is probably appared in a magazine. We don't have information abouti the hautor of this draw. It is about opposition between two parts of people.
First I will describe the picture, then I will try to analysis. Finally I will give my opinion.

II/ Description
We can see through picture, the first one on the left is a little birdwho holds a rope in his mouth. Below, the autor writes "early birds".
On the right, we can see an other bird : an owls. is He holds the other end of the rope in his mouth. Below, the autor writes "night owls".

The letters for the first birds and the second aren't the same.
The first one is written in tiny letters and the second one in capital letters.

III/ Analysis
The picture represents two parts of the population. The first bird represents a part who lives on the day. The owls represents people who lives a part of the night. The rope shows the link which between them.

IV/ Give his opinion
The society is rather done for these persons who live nowadays.




1 commentaire pour ce devoir


LénaAdrs
LénaAdrs
Posté le 16 déc. 2019

Au niveau de l'introduction :

We don't know... It has probably appeared... We don't have information about it the hater... First, I .... Finally, I...

 

Au niveau de la description: 

See through the picture... is a little bird who... Below, the author...

We can see another birdan owl. Holds he the other... Below, the author...

 

Au niveau de l'analyse:

The first bird represents a party... The owls represent people who live...

Il n'y a plus de fautes après. 


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