- Partage ce devoir avec tes amis !
Sujet du devoir
Bonjour pouvez-vous me corriger cette lettre en anglais.Merci
Elève de 3éme du collège rose valland, je souhaite participer a un concours de secrétariat d'une durée de 3 jours. Du lundi 29 Novembre au Mercredi 1er Décembre
Le secteur du secrétariat m'intéresse beaucoup, c'est pour cela que j'ai choisis votre établissement.
J'aime beaucoup ce domaine et les relations avec le personnel, Je n'ai pas d'expérience. c'est pour cela que je souhaite participer à ce concours
cela me permettrait d'en connaître plus sur ce domaine et d'approfondir mes connaissances au niveau du fonctionnement d'une entreprise.
J'aurais plaisir à découvrir la réalité de ce métier au sein de votre société.
Dans l'attente de votre réponse ou d'un éventuel entretien, je vous prie d'agréer Madame, Monsieur, mes salutations distinguées.
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
3rd student of the college Valland Rose, I would participate in a contest heads to a period of three days. From Monday, November 29 to Wednesday December 1The sector secretariat am very interested, that's why I chose your school.
I love this area and relationships with staff, I have no experience. that's why I want to participate in this contest
would allow me to know more about this area and to deepen my knowledge in the functioning of a company.
I enjoy discovering the reality of this job within your company.
Pending your response or a possible interview, please accept Dear Sincerely
5 commentaires pour ce devoir
salut :)
"in The secreatrial sector I am very interested. "
l'ordre des mots n'est pas correct, j'écrirais " I am very interested in the secretarial sector"
"in The secreatrial sector I am very interested. "
l'ordre des mots n'est pas correct, j'écrirais " I am very interested in the secretarial sector"
Hello there!
Voici un "modèle" de lettre de motivation - même si on peut toujours faire mieux !
Dear Sir,
I am currently a final-year student at Valland Rose High School, and as such, I would very much like to participate in a three-day secretarial contest starting Monday, November 29th until Wednesday, December 1st 2010.
Indeed, I am very interested in working as a PA / Personal Assistant. That is mainly the reason why I chose your school.
Although I do not have any previous experience in that field, I truly love the idea of the job and I am also quite a sociable person.
So, taking part in such a competition/contest would surely be a good opportunity for me to learn more about working as a secretary / PA. And it would, no doubt, enable me to improve/further my knowledge on how to run a company.
In this regard, I would therefore really appreciate discovering the reality of it all as a full member of your staff.
Looking forward to your reply,
Yours faithfully,
Bonne chance !
iamjofr
Voici un "modèle" de lettre de motivation - même si on peut toujours faire mieux !
Dear Sir,
I am currently a final-year student at Valland Rose High School, and as such, I would very much like to participate in a three-day secretarial contest starting Monday, November 29th until Wednesday, December 1st 2010.
Indeed, I am very interested in working as a PA / Personal Assistant. That is mainly the reason why I chose your school.
Although I do not have any previous experience in that field, I truly love the idea of the job and I am also quite a sociable person.
So, taking part in such a competition/contest would surely be a good opportunity for me to learn more about working as a secretary / PA. And it would, no doubt, enable me to improve/further my knowledge on how to run a company.
In this regard, I would therefore really appreciate discovering the reality of it all as a full member of your staff.
Looking forward to your reply,
Yours faithfully,
Bonne chance !
iamjofr
Hello there!
Erreur de contexte.
Dans la lettre, pour collège, il faut lire "secondary school" ( et non pas "high school" = lycée )
Sorry
iamjofr
Erreur de contexte.
Dans la lettre, pour collège, il faut lire "secondary school" ( et non pas "high school" = lycée )
Sorry
iamjofr
Merci beaucoup de m'avoir aider.
Est-ce que vous penser que je peux ajouter dans cette lettre : yet, already, since, for, used to, une proposition infinitive.
Merci.
Est-ce que vous penser que je peux ajouter dans cette lettre : yet, already, since, for, used to, une proposition infinitive.
Merci.
Ils ont besoin d'aide !
- Aucun devoir trouvé, poste ton devoir maintenant.
From MOnday 29th of Nov, to Wednesday 1st of Dec.
in The secreatrial sector I am very interested. That's why I chose your school.
I love this area and relationships with staff, I have no experience. that's why I xould like to participate in this contest.
It would allow me to know more about this area and to deepen my knowledge in the functioning of a company.
I would enjoy discovering the reality of this job within your company.
I wait for your answer, or a possible interview.
Please accpt Dear sincerely