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Partner A: Hello, il has been a long time since one it is not seen!Partner B: Yes , effectively, I just come to from San Francisco in to California, I am to stay two weeks, in San Francisco the climate was Mediterranean, the popualtion was numerous, it was the first time when I went to San Francisco this journey memorable.
Partner A: It is great then! I too had gone in the USA
Partner B:With whom you had left and when?
Partner A : I had gone with my best friend to San Francisco in to California, I am to stay two weeks, in San Francisco the climate was Mediterranean, the popualtion was numerous, it was the first time when I went to San Francisco this journey memorable.
Partner B: Very well it is completed! The climate was the similar in San Francisco, I was to accommodate in the hotel Meridien San francisco who was great there was a lot of activity and especially the atmosphere was formidable.
During my journey in Califorinie I had visited 3 place, The 1st was the Brigde Golden Gate it is most that I have to like because I like very much the second place I had to visit Alcatraz Island the place was very sublime recently I had liked Russian hill.
Partner A : Very well it is completed! The climate was the similar in San Francisco,I was to accommodate in the hotel Meridien San francisco who was great there was a lot of activity and especially the atmosphere was formidable.
During my journey in Califorinie I had visited 3 place, The 1st was the Brigde Golden Gate it is most that I have to like because I like very much the second place I had to visit Alcatraz Island the place was very sublime recently I had liked Russian hill.
I did not know that San Francisco was a very big city where we have the same step been able to visit him in the 2 weeks.
I had eaten in restaurante the name is Aqua his speciality is fruit of elegant sea.
Partner B : Good Ba it is very well! Moa I had eaten in the restaurant the name is Aqua his speciality is fruit of elegant sea. I had liked well. I did not know that San Francisco was a very big city where we have the same step been able to visit him in the 2 weeks
Partner A : During my journey I had used a rather unusual means of transportation it was the bus.
Partner B :During my journey I had used a rather unusual means of transportation it was the bus.
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Bonjour, pouvez vous me corriger mes faute d'ortographe surtout le préterit ainsi que le present perfect il ne faut pas qu'il y a d'autre verbe.*
MERCiiiiiiiii
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Merci enfète c'est un dialogue mais je sais pas si je suis le partner A ou B donc j'apprend les deux mais sa va changer apré Merci de ton aide
Petite correction (mais sinon le reste est bon) :
Partner B: Yes , effectively, I just came BACK from San Francisco,
Partner B: Yes , effectively, I just came BACK from San Francisco,
- I went ALONG with my best friend [to San Francisco, California](déjà dit).
- The climate was similar...
- During my journey in Califorinie I visited 3 places...
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- The climate was similar...
- During my journey in Califorinie I visited 3 places...
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tu veux surement dire pas d'autres temps (au lieu de verbes).
Partner A: Hello, il has been a long time since you have not been seen!
Partner B: Yes , effectively, I just came from San Francisco, California where I stayed two weeks. In San Francisco, the climate is (vérité) Mediterranean, the popualtion is (vérité) numerous, it was the first time I went to San Francisco, this journey has been memorable.
Partner A: It is great then! I went to the USA too.
Partner B: Who did you go with? and when did you leave?
Partner A : I went with my best friend to San Francisco, California. [[ I am to stay two weeks, in San Francisco the climate was Mediterranean, the popualtion was numerous, it was the first time when I went to San Francisco this journey memorable.]] DEJA DIT
Partner B: Very well it is complete! The climate was similar in San Francisco, I was accommodating in the Meridien San francisco Hotel which was great. There was a lot of activity and especially the atmosphere was wonderful.
During my journey in California, I visited 3 places: [[The 1st was the Brigde Golden Gate it is most that I have to like because I like very much the second place I had to visit Alcatraz Island the place was very sublime recently I had liked Russian hill.]] NE VEUT RIEN DIRE
[[Partner A : Very well it is completed! The climate was the similar in San Francisco,I was to accommodate in the hotel Meridien San francisco who was great there was a lot of activity and especially the atmosphere was formidable.
During my journey in Califorinie I had visited 3 place, The 1st was the Brigde Golden Gate it is most that I have to like because I like very much the second place I had to visit Alcatraz Island the place was very sublime recently I had liked Russian hill. ]] DEJA DIT
I did not realise that San Francisco was a very big city where we hadn't been able to visit everything in the 2 weeks.
I ate in restaurant which name is Aqua and its speciality is fruit of elegant sea. ??? quoi?
Partner B : Good Ba? it is very well! Moa [[I had eaten in the restaurant the name is Aqua his speciality is fruit of elegant sea. I had liked well. I did not know that San Francisco was a very big city where we have the same step been able to visit him in the 2 weeks.]] DEJA DIT
Partner A : During my journey I travelled by a rather unusual means of transportation: the bus.
Partner B :[[During my journey I had used a rather unusual means of transportation it was the bus.]] DEJA DIT
est-il normal qu'il y ait des répétitions de phrases dans le texte?
un passage ne veut rien dire (j'ai noté à coté)