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E: Hy, what did you done last holidaysA: I have been to italy
A: Ok, How long did you spend there ?
A; I stayed there 2 week
E: Infact you have just come back, haven't you ?
A: Yes, i have
A: What did you done ?
E: Have you ever visited the palazzo reale ?
A: Have you ever been to Torino ?
A: No, i haven't done yet but i have already been to Torino
E: Have you already eaten in the Italian restaurant ?
A :Have you ever eaten the italian Ice Cream
A: Yes i have, well I must do it, by
E et A: By By
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Bonjour,
quelques petites fautes, je mets la correction en majuscules:
E: Hy, what did you DO FOR THE last holidays?
A: I WENT to Italy.
A: Ok, How long did you spend there ?
A; I stayed there FOR 2 WEEKS.
E: In fact, you just CAME back, DIDN'T you ?
A: Yes, I DID.
E: What did you DO ?
E: Have you ever visited the palazzo reale ?
E: Have you ever been to Torino ?
A: No, I haven't VISITED IT yet but I have already been to Torino.
E: Have you already eaten in AN Italian restaurant ?
E :Have you ever eaten AN Italian Ice Cream
A: Yes I have, well I must do it, BYE
E et A: BYE, BYE
=> normalement seul le personnage E pose les questions sur le voyage en Italie et A répond (A ne pose pas de questions)
=> pourquoi A dit "I must do it" à la fin? (je dois le faire)
à quoi ça fait référence?
quelques petites fautes, je mets la correction en majuscules:
E: Hy, what did you DO FOR THE last holidays?
A: I WENT to Italy.
A: Ok, How long did you spend there ?
A; I stayed there FOR 2 WEEKS.
E: In fact, you just CAME back, DIDN'T you ?
A: Yes, I DID.
E: What did you DO ?
E: Have you ever visited the palazzo reale ?
E: Have you ever been to Torino ?
A: No, I haven't VISITED IT yet but I have already been to Torino.
E: Have you already eaten in AN Italian restaurant ?
E :Have you ever eaten AN Italian Ice Cream
A: Yes I have, well I must do it, BYE
E et A: BYE, BYE
=> normalement seul le personnage E pose les questions sur le voyage en Italie et A répond (A ne pose pas de questions)
=> pourquoi A dit "I must do it" à la fin? (je dois le faire)
à quoi ça fait référence?
E: HI ! What did you DO DURING THE last holidays?
A: I WENT to Italy.
A: Okay. How long did you STAY there ?
A; I stayed there FOR 2 WEEKS.
E: INDEED, you just CAME back, DIDN'T you ?
A: Yes, I DID.
E: What did you DO ?
E: Have you ever visited the Palazzo Reale ?
E: Have you ever been to Torino ?
A: No, I haven't VISITED IT yet but I have already been to Torino.
E: Have you already eaten in AN Italian restaurant ?
E :Have you ever eaten AN Italian Ice Cream ?
A: Yes I have. Well I HAVE TO GO. BYE !
A: BYE, BYE !
A: I WENT to Italy.
A: Okay. How long did you STAY there ?
A; I stayed there FOR 2 WEEKS.
E: INDEED, you just CAME back, DIDN'T you ?
A: Yes, I DID.
E: What did you DO ?
E: Have you ever visited the Palazzo Reale ?
E: Have you ever been to Torino ?
A: No, I haven't VISITED IT yet but I have already been to Torino.
E: Have you already eaten in AN Italian restaurant ?
E :Have you ever eaten AN Italian Ice Cream ?
A: Yes I have. Well I HAVE TO GO. BYE !
A: BYE, BYE !
Correction:
Au lieu de:
E: What did you DO ?
-> What have you done ?
Au lieu de:
E: What did you DO ?
-> What have you done ?
bonjour
je ne vois pas de fautes à part dans la première phrase mais cenedra te l'a corrigée
ton dialogue est pas mal
je ne vois pas de fautes à part dans la première phrase mais cenedra te l'a corrigée
ton dialogue est pas mal
Je vais essayer de corriger ce que je peux :
E: Hi, what did you do last holidays ?
A: I went to Italy.
A: Ok, How long did you spend there ?
A; I stayed there for 2 weeks.
E: Actually you just came back, didn't you ?
A: Yes, i did.
A: What did you do ?
E: Have you ever visited the palazzo reale ?
A: Have you ever been to Torino ?
A: No, i haven't visited the palazzo reale but i've already been to Torino.
E: Have you already eaten in an Italian restaurant ?
A :Have you ever eaten an italian ice cream ?
A: Yes i have. Well, i have to go, bye.
E et A: Bye, bye.
J'espère que ça t'aidera :)
E: Hi, what did you do last holidays ?
A: I went to Italy.
A: Ok, How long did you spend there ?
A; I stayed there for 2 weeks.
E: Actually you just came back, didn't you ?
A: Yes, i did.
A: What did you do ?
E: Have you ever visited the palazzo reale ?
A: Have you ever been to Torino ?
A: No, i haven't visited the palazzo reale but i've already been to Torino.
E: Have you already eaten in an Italian restaurant ?
A :Have you ever eaten an italian ice cream ?
A: Yes i have. Well, i have to go, bye.
E et A: Bye, bye.
J'espère que ça t'aidera :)
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Il est vraient cool ton dialogue!
Personneleent je le trouve pas maal
A paart tu as fait une faute d'orthographe
c'est pas 2 week mais 2 weeks !
Bonne chance pr la suite ;)