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Voila, j'aimerais que vous corrigiez mes fautes si vous en trouver parce que ma prof des qu'elle en voit une c'est -5 donc --'Le sujet c'est enfaite comme un journal de bord, il faut raconter ce qui se passe, ce qui s'est passer, ou ce qui va se passer. La gelere pour choisir les temps !
Je remerci tout les internautes qui m'ont aider à rediger ce texte :D
Merci :)
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Dear dairy,Today is the D day
It's 4:00 am. I just come to get up. It was easy to wake up because I'm so excited and impatient. I dreamt that we were in the eurostar and that there was an accident !
Now I get dressed. I can't wait anymore !
I'm in the car next to my mother. She's driving very fast because I think I'm late. Oh no ! Imagine the eurostar is already left.
Its impossible it's 7:00 am. I have to be cool but I'm so exciting about my arrival to London.
We're in the station, we're waiting on chairs, we're talking and eating. Julie thinks she has forgotten her camera. Bad luck ! And Agathe has forgotten her phone. It is seven past eight. There is everybody.
I'm in the eurostar next to Abir. Sarah and Anne are in front of us. I just called my mother to tell her that we are in the train and that it will start. Apparently, Eurostar stops at Lille, we might cross other classes.
Abir is eating chips and she's sending sms as usual !
Mohamed makes people laugh as usual. I'm boredom...
I'm with my correspondent. They came to look for me. I talked a lot with them. The father names Tomy Merchants ans the mother names Blair Marchants. They are both musician ans american. Their daughter Katy is my correspondent. We're the same age old. She's only girl.
They're rich because they have a detached house in a rich area (Bayswater road) and there is a swimming pool in the house !! They have a picture of Picasso on the wall. They promised me that tomorrow we would go to go shopping before I join my companions.
The metrostation near my place is Lancaster Gate. It's an old house. It's very comfortable. We're as sung as a bug in a rug (On se sent bien chez soit). It's next to Hyde Park. I prefer my French room because I don't share my room...
My British room is tall. The bed is bigger than my bed in France. There a balcony. The walls are white and pink. The bedcover is purple. The carpet is pink so a bedroom girl ! I share my room with Katy, my correspondent.
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Mercii beaucoup ! Tu m'a beaucoup aider vraiment :)
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voilà ma correction:
Dear dairy,
Today is the D day
It's 4:00 am. I just got up. It was easy to wake up because I'm so excited and impatient. I dreamt that we were in the eurostar and that there was an accident !
Now I'm getting dressed. I can't wait anymore !
I'm in the car next to my mother. She's driving very fast because I think I'm late. Oh no ! Imagine the eurostar has already left.
Its impossible it's 7:00 am. I have to be calm but I'm so excited about my trip to London.
We're in the station, we're waiting on chairs, we're talking and eating. Julie thinks she has forgotten her camera. Bad luck ! And Agathe has forgotten her phone. It is seven past eight. Everyone is here.
I'm in the eurostar next to Abir. Sarah and Anne are in front of us. I just called my mother to tell her that we are in the train and that it will start. Apparently, Eurostar stops at Lille, we might cross other classes.
Abir is eating chips and she's sending sms as usual !
Mohamed makes people laugh as usual. I'm bored...
I'm with Katy, my correspondent, and her parents. They came looking for me. I talked a lot with them. The father's name is Tomy Merchants and the mother's name is Blair Merchants. They are both musician and american. Their daughter Katy is my correspondent. We're of the same age. She's an only girl.
They're rich because they have a detached house in a rich area (Bayswater road) and there is a swimming pool in the house !! They have a painting from Picasso on the wall. They promised me that tomorrow we will go shopping before I join my companions.
The tube station near the place is Lancaster Gate.
It's an old house. It's very comfortable. We're as snug as a bug in a rug (On se sent bien chez soi). It's next to Hyde Park. I prefer my French room because I don't have to share my room...
My British room is wide. The bed is bigger than my bed in France. There is a balcony. The walls are white and pink. The bedcover is purple. The carpet is also pink. This is such a girly bedroom! It's my correspondent's bedroom. I share it with Katy.
Il y avait encore quelques fautes. J'ai arrangé certains passages pour plus de clarté.