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Bonjour, j'ai un exposé oral à faire mais la prof m'a d'abord dit de le faire sur papier. Je dois tenir 5 minutes ce qui equivaut à 20 lignes. Merci de m'aidez.Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
J'ai deja écrit 13 lignes.J'ai écrit:
"Hi ! My name is ***. I am *** years old. My birthday is on February the twenty-first. I was born in Briançon. I have got two big half brothers. The oldest is ** years old. His name is Stéphane. The youngest is ** years old. His name is Thomas. I have got a dog called Leo and a cat called Ticas. My dog is brown, My cat is white and black. I live in a house in ***. I have my own room. In my house, there is a kitchen. There are Two bathrooms and two bedroom. There is a big garden too. My favourite colour is purple and my favourite season is summer. I collected coins. I like swimming. I am crazy about reading. I am fond of talking to my friends. I don't like playing sports. I hate snakes. Doing the week, I get up at seven. I have breakfast at half past seven. I start school at quarter past eight. I have lunch at ten past twelve. I finished school at quarter to five. Then I do my homework in the boarding school. It's super because boarders help me. I have dinner at quarter to seven. I go to bed at half past nine. My favourite food is pastas. At weekends, I usually get up later. I like watching TV My favourite programme is Une famille en or. I watch it every Saturday. It's great."
Si vous trouvez des fautes, des phrases à rajouter ou à éthopher merci de me le dire.
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Coucou !
Alors ton exposé est bien, mais détaille plus développe...
Par exemple explique pourquoi t'aime la saison été, pourquoi tu dois te lever tot sans doute parceque tu n'habites pas près de l'école bref. Tu peux dire aussi quel est le demi frère qui vit avec toi en ce moment et ou est l'autre(s'il habite ailleurs).
Voilà en espérant sa à pu t'aider, Bonne Chance !
Alors ton exposé est bien, mais détaille plus développe...
Par exemple explique pourquoi t'aime la saison été, pourquoi tu dois te lever tot sans doute parceque tu n'habites pas près de l'école bref. Tu peux dire aussi quel est le demi frère qui vit avec toi en ce moment et ou est l'autre(s'il habite ailleurs).
Voilà en espérant sa à pu t'aider, Bonne Chance !
merci
merci
Quand tu met "collected coins" pourquoi le "ed" à la fin ? Si tu le fais toujours met ta phrase au présent.
ok merci
Voici mes correction :
Hi ! My name is ^^^. I am ^^ years old. My birthday is on *the twenty-first of February*. I was born in Briançon. I have *two brothers who are older than me* . The oldest is ^^ years old. His name is Stéphane. The *younger* is ^^ years old. His name is Thomas. I have *a dog called Leo and a cat called Ticas*. My dog is brown, *my* cat is white and black. I live in a house in ^^^. I have my own room. In my house, there is a kitchen. There are Two bathrooms and *two bedroom*. There is *also* a big garden. My *favorite* *color* is purple and my favourite season is summer. I collected *coins( coins or money !?)*. I *love* swimming. I am crazy about reading. I am fond of talking to my friends. I don't like *doing* sports. I hate snakes. *During* the week, I wake* up at seven *in the morning (ou am)*. I have breakfast at half past seven. I start school at quarter past eight. I have lunch at ten past twelve. I *finish* school at quarter to five. Then I do my homework in *a* boarding school. It's *great* because boarders help me. I have dinner at quarter to seven. I go to bed at half past nine. My favourite food is pastas. *During the* weekends, I usually *wake* up later. I like watching TV My favourite programme is Une famille en or. I watch it every Saturday. It's great.
*(avec mots ou phrases)*=mes correction
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Hi ! My name is ^^^. I am ^^ years old. My birthday is on *the twenty-first of February*. I was born in Briançon. I have *two brothers who are older than me* . The oldest is ^^ years old. His name is Stéphane. The *younger* is ^^ years old. His name is Thomas. I have *a dog called Leo and a cat called Ticas*. My dog is brown, *my* cat is white and black. I live in a house in ^^^. I have my own room. In my house, there is a kitchen. There are Two bathrooms and *two bedroom*. There is *also* a big garden. My *favorite* *color* is purple and my favourite season is summer. I collected *coins( coins or money !?)*. I *love* swimming. I am crazy about reading. I am fond of talking to my friends. I don't like *doing* sports. I hate snakes. *During* the week, I wake* up at seven *in the morning (ou am)*. I have breakfast at half past seven. I start school at quarter past eight. I have lunch at ten past twelve. I *finish* school at quarter to five. Then I do my homework in *a* boarding school. It's *great* because boarders help me. I have dinner at quarter to seven. I go to bed at half past nine. My favourite food is pastas. *During the* weekends, I usually *wake* up later. I like watching TV My favourite programme is Une famille en or. I watch it every Saturday. It's great.
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merci
Salut !
Tu ne dois pas te décrire,de parler de toi,tes hobbies,etc... mais tu dois parler d'un sujet en anglais!!
Je te conseille de prendre un pays,une ville ou une personnalité.
Tu ne dois pas te décrire,de parler de toi,tes hobbies,etc... mais tu dois parler d'un sujet en anglais!!
Je te conseille de prendre un pays,une ville ou une personnalité.
Elle nous a dit à moi et ma classe de parler de ce qu'on voulait mais que ce serait bien de nous présenter car elle n'était pas là au début de l'année. Voilà.
I would like to be ... (J'aimerai devenir ...)
I'm really keen on watching TV (Je suis vraiment ''fan'' de regarder la télé, au mot à mot!)
BREF, utilise d'autres mots que LIKE LIKE ET RE-LIKE ;) La prof appréciera !
I'm really keen on watching TV (Je suis vraiment ''fan'' de regarder la télé, au mot à mot!)
BREF, utilise d'autres mots que LIKE LIKE ET RE-LIKE ;) La prof appréciera !
ok merci
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Utilise I'm fond of , I'am crazy about , I enjoy etc ...
Uilise la phrase genre tu dis plus tard tu voudrais : Later , I would like to be