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Sujet du devoir
Bonjour à tous, pouvez- vous m'aider pour mon devoir d'anglais.
Production écrite
You are an English pupil in a school in London. Last month you won an essay competition
in your school. The prize was a study trip of one week in Canada!
You are staying with a Canadian family. Today is the last day of your trip. The date is the
15th of February. You have to write an account of your trip and send it by email to your
class in England. (Tu es un(e) élève anglais(e) à Londres. Le mois dernier, tu as gagné un prix pour une
rédaction. Le prix était un voyage d’études pour une semaine au Canada. Tu as été accueilli(e) dans une
famille canadienne. Aujourd’hui, le 15 février, est le dernier jour de ton séjour. Tu dois envoyer un courriel
à ta classe en Angleterre et raconter ton séjour).
Before you write your email you have to prepare it. Use your imagination and complete the
information. Avant de rédiger ton email, tu dois te préparer. (Travail de préparation non noté).
First, imagine a very English name for yourself!
Write your name here: .......................................................................................................
Imagine the name of the Canadian family you are staying with.
Write the name of the family here: .....................................................................................
The day you arrived in Canada: ..........................................................................................
The city you arrived in: ........................................................................................................
The weather (remember the date!) ......................................................................................
Your first impressions of Canada (big? small? many people?)
..........................................................................................................................................
During the trip you went to an ice hockey game. Imagine in which city you saw the game:
...........................................................................................................................................
Write the names of the two teams that were playing: .................................................. and
...........................................................................................................................................
Write the result of the game: ...............................................................................................
Write an adjective that describes the game (boring, exciting...):
..........................................................................................................................................
Imagine how you travelled to the stadium: ..........................................................................
Did you go to the game alone? If not, imagine who you were with: ......................................
You also visited two museums during the week. One museum is dedicated to the history of
the First Nations of Canada. Write down three pieces of information about the First Nations
that you will include in your email:
..................................
The second museum was dedicated to the Acadians. In your mail tell your friends in England
who the Acadians were and what happened to them.
You are going to enclose three photographs of your trip. Decide the title of each photograph.
Imagine the subject of each photograph:
.........................................................................................................................................
.........................................................................................................................................
.........................................................................................................................................
Write down here any other information you want to include in your email:
...................................................................................................
You now have the information you need to write your email. The next step is to organize
your email into paragraphs. Do this in your exercise book now.
(Tu as maintenant tous les renseignements nécessaires pour écrire ton email. La prochaine étape est de
l’organiser en paragraphes. Fais-le sur ton cahier ).
Paragraph one: information about your arrival in Canada, the Canadian family, first
impressions....
Paragraph two: information about what you have seen (museums, ice hockey....)
Paragraph three: Photos, extra information...... .
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Voilà de ce que j'ai avancée :
Write your name here: Emmy's
Write the name of the family here: Mr and Mrs Tremblay
The day you arrived in Canada: February 8 (le 8 Février)
The city you arrived in: Québec
The weather (remember the date!): it is very cold, it snows, there is hail, it rains and very rarely rays of sun.
Your first impressions of Canada (big? small? many people?) : Many people, wonderful, amazing, giant, breathtaking.
During the trip you went to an ice hockey game. Imagine in which city you saw the game: Ottawa
Write the names of the two teams that were playing: Sénateurs d'Ottawa (équipe de Ottawa) VS Maple Leafs de Toronto ( équipe de Toronto)
Write the result of the game: 6-4 ( Ottawa gagne)
Write an adjective that describes the game (boring, exciting...): amazing ( premier match de hockey qu'elle voit de sa vie)
Imagine how you travelled to the stadium: plane
Did you go to the game alone? If not, imagine who you were with: Family's Tremblay
Voilà de ce que j'ai fait en espérant avoir une réponse.
Cordialement.
8 commentaires pour ce devoir
je ne comprend spas tu ne peux pas t'appeller emmy'S (tu doit enlever l'apostrophe et le s)et il me semble que l'on parle français au québec
aussi vu que c'est la fin du voyage tu vas devoir utiliser le passé dans ton mail et donc dire it was cold
et surtout penses à bien développer et à utiliser des mots de liaisons
D'accord, es que tu pourrais me donné un début pour l'email pour que je débute
Hey guys,
How are things?
As you must remember I won a study trip in Canada a month ago and today is the last day of it. Let me tell you more.
First of all, I arrived in "nom de la ville" the 8th of February. It was a cold, snowy, and windy day. That's why I was wearing gloves and really thick socks.
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voila pour le début du devoir à toi de continuer
PS: étant donné que tu t'adresses à tes camarades de classes tu peux utiliser le registre familier et donc terminer par quelque chose comme "XOXO" avant de signer
alors, tu as réussi ???
merciii^^
Ce que t'a fait est bien et ca me parait juste.
quand tu as terminé tu peux le poster pour que je te corrige (si tu veux ^^)
Ils ont besoin d'aide !
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"You are going to enclose three photographs of your trip. Decide the title of each photograph.
Imagine the subject of each photograph"
il faut déja que tu saches quelles sont les photos que tu vas mettre puis tu diras dans ton mail quelque chose du genre "here are some pics of my trip."et tu expliques ce qu'elles montrent. tu peux par exemple prendre une photo de la famille, de leur maison, ou encore du match de hockey que tu as vu