Lettre de motivation en Anglais à faire pour entrer dans une section Euro

Sujet du devoir

Je dois faire une lettre de motivation pour entrer dans une section Européenne au lycée en Anglais, bien sûr. Je dois donc donner envie qu'on me choisisse car cst comme un concour, il y a une sélection, ils ne prennent que les 30 meilleurs. Il y a trois étapes, dont la première, la lettre de motivation pour la toute première sélection. "Je dois me vendre!"

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

J'ai déjà fais la lettre, mais mnt j'aimerai que vous me corrigiez dans la structure des phrases, les expressions et qq expressions. Jsp que votre niveau ne sauras pas tp élevé car ca se sent ds la rédaction.

First, my name is Sandra and I’m 14. I am a pupil of 3e in the secondary school of Saint Exupéry. I studied “English Plus” only in 3e, while the others pupils did that for 2 years. Since I was in 6e, I learnt Germany in first language because my parents have made an error in my file at the time of my entrance in the public secondary school conscript Baudelaire. But, me, I wanted to learn English in first language, so I asked my mother to change my secondary school to study that. When Saint Exupéry‘s says me I was accepted, I was very happy, even though I know I miss my friends. I used to learn English in second language, and yet now I have the same language since they were in 6e. Moreover, I would like to be a physician later. So I have to become at least a bilingual in my job. [ J’aurai ] chosen “Section Euro” but I am bad at history and geography. In fact, I’d like to speak and understand mo easily and quickly than now. I already went to England for a language-learning trip 2 years ago. And last year, I went to the USA too.

Merci d'avance (: .