Lettre de motivation section euro Anglais

Sujet du devoir

Je suis en troisième et je dois rédiger une lettre de motivation en Anglais afin d'intégrer une section européenne Anglais en seconde générale.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

J'ai déjà rédiger ma lettre. Merci de la corriger.

Mrs.the headmaster,
I am currently in 3° in Vaison-la-Romaine. I have asked my assignment in the high school Victor Hugo. I really like to integrate your english european section in 2°. I am really interested in your section because its teaching is given in part on physical, a subject witch I like a lot. Besides, I envisage to prepare a scientific baccalauréat and to pursue scientific studies. To learn physical in English is quite enthralling and enriching. If I were accepted, I also would aquire an appreciable level in English and the scientific knowledge. I also really enjoy learning about the english culture and language. That is why I will spend a fortnight's holiday in a hostfamilie in London this summer. In conclusion, the finality is to obtain the best possible level during my studies, this competence being very useful to continue higher education like in tyhe world of the company. This will also enable me to widen my circle of relationship through communicating with other Anglophone people and to travel all around the world to discover various cultures.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon, and hoping for a favorable answer. Thank you for your time and consideration,
Sincerely,
Dadale