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il faut que je parle pendant 4 min sur le sujet " My last Holidays " je vais donc raconter mes vacances de paques . Pourriez vous corriger mes fautes , merci d'avanceOù j'en suis dans mon devoir
I'm going to talk about my last holidays ,I'm going at 3 various places .
First I visit my father , my step mother , and my two step sisters , I like going over there because it's relaxing . I look for easter Eggs with my step sisters Camille and Eloise they are two and four years old . When they looks the Easter Eggs they are too exciting and they Proclaim << The bells , the bells !! >> , they run everywhere but the littler was fall over in a dog mess . And the dog ate 3 easter with aluminium foil , i thinl it's not very delicious .
Three days later , I going visit my aunt , she lives in the Loiret at la ferté saint aubin . I can see my cousins , Florian , Adrien and cassandra . With them , i playing tennis , going to the swimming pool and i take shopping . my favorit activity is shopping but i don't enjoy to play tennis , It's too tired and boring . I past three days with them .
Then , I see a friend she past two days with me , we takes a lot of photography . We going to carnival of blois and we takes shopping with my mother , we try a lot of clothes , It's funny .
Finally i Going with my boyfriend and his parents to sea , we visit a museum of shellfish , it's interresting and some are very beautiful . I'm not swim in the sea because it's too cold .
During the rest of my holidays i do my homeworks ans i prepar my oral examination of english .
My holidays have fun , they are better than my easter holidays and i hope to my easter holiday are also good that this one
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Pourquoi tu mets tes verbes au présent?Tu parles de tes dernières vacances, non?A un moment tu as mis "i thinl" je pense que tu as du faire une erreur de frappe car c'est i think et pareil au 4ième paragraphe tu a mis "ans" au lieu de and.C'est tout, le reste je pense que c'est bon mais je pense que tu devrais rectifier tes verbes que t'as mis au présent après je ne sais pas quelle était ta consigne donc fais ce que tu veux.Voili voilou bonne chance pour ton oral:D
I'm going to talk about my last holidays.
I went to 3 different places .
First, I visited my father , my step mother , and my two step sisters. I like to go there because it's relaxing . I looked for Easter Eggs with my step sisters Camille and Eloise. They are two and four years old . When they looked for the Easter Eggs, they were so excited that they shouted "The bells , the bells!". They ran everywhere, but the smallest fell in a dog mess . The dog ate 3 Easter eggs with aluminium foil; I think it wasn't very tasty.
Three days later, I visited my aunt. She lives in the Loiret, in La Ferté Saint Aubin. I saw my cousins Florian, Adrien and Cassandra. I played tennis , went shopping and swam with them. My favourite activity is shopping, but I don't enjoy playing tennis: it's too boring. I spent three days with them .
Afterwards , I saw a friend who stayed two days with me. We took a lot of photos . We went to the carnival of Blois and we did shopping with my mother. We tried a lot of clothes, it was funny.
Finally, I went to the sea with my boyfriend and his parents. We visited a shellfish gallery. It was interesting, and some are very beautiful. I didn't swim in the sea because it was too cold.
During the rest of my holidays, I did my homework ans I prepared my oral exam of English.
My holidays were fun. They were my best Easter holidays, and I hope that my next Easter holidays will be as good as this one.
I went to 3 different places .
First, I visited my father , my step mother , and my two step sisters. I like to go there because it's relaxing . I looked for Easter Eggs with my step sisters Camille and Eloise. They are two and four years old . When they looked for the Easter Eggs, they were so excited that they shouted "The bells , the bells!". They ran everywhere, but the smallest fell in a dog mess . The dog ate 3 Easter eggs with aluminium foil; I think it wasn't very tasty.
Three days later, I visited my aunt. She lives in the Loiret, in La Ferté Saint Aubin. I saw my cousins Florian, Adrien and Cassandra. I played tennis , went shopping and swam with them. My favourite activity is shopping, but I don't enjoy playing tennis: it's too boring. I spent three days with them .
Afterwards , I saw a friend who stayed two days with me. We took a lot of photos . We went to the carnival of Blois and we did shopping with my mother. We tried a lot of clothes, it was funny.
Finally, I went to the sea with my boyfriend and his parents. We visited a shellfish gallery. It was interesting, and some are very beautiful. I didn't swim in the sea because it was too cold.
During the rest of my holidays, I did my homework ans I prepared my oral exam of English.
My holidays were fun. They were my best Easter holidays, and I hope that my next Easter holidays will be as good as this one.
Tu fais surtout des fautes au niveau des temps, de le structure de la phrase (qui n'est pas la même qu'en français), et du vocabulaire.
Essaie de faire des phrases courtes, c'est plus facile à l'oral et ça donne une meilleure image.
Bon courage
Essaie de faire des phrases courtes, c'est plus facile à l'oral et ça donne une meilleure image.
Bon courage
During the rest of my holidays, I did my homework ans I prepared my oral exam of English.
J'ai juste fait une petite faute dans cette phrase : remplace "ans" par "and".
J'ai juste fait une petite faute dans cette phrase : remplace "ans" par "and".
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