Présentation en anglais

Sujet du devoir

bonjour, je dois me présenter en anglais, à l'orale. J'ai déja commencé mon tavail. Est-ce que vous pouvez corriger mes erreurs et me dire si je peux rajoueter des éléments ?

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

voici ce que j'ai fait :

Hello!
I am !!!!! and I live in !!!!!!!. I was born on the !!!!!! in !!!!, so I am !!!!! and I am a !!!!!. My hair is dark brown and my eyes are black. I am !!!! meter !!!!!. My favourite colors are blue and rot. My school is !!!!!! and Mrs. !!!!! is the headmistress of my school. Mrs. !!!!! is my head teacher. I like Physical Education because I am crazy about sport and I am fond of History because it’s interesting. I don’t like Arts because I dislike drawing and I hate Music because it’s boring. The conjugation and transparent word are easy in English. The pronunciation is difficult in English. I am keen on football because I play good but I loathe dance because I can’t bear dancing. I haven’t any pets. Lionel Messi is my favourite star. My father is !!!!! and a !!!!! and my mother is !!!!!!. I have one brother and I have one sister. I would like ophthalmologist. I am a Sports-lover because I did different sports and I am extremely generous because I am fond of to share and I am not very disorderly because I can’t stand the disorderly.


Est-ce que vous pouvez corriger mes erreurs et me dire si je peux rajouter des choses.

PS : je ne sais comment dire, je suis en troisième.