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Publié le 16 juin 2011 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 23 juin 2011 dans 12A
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Sujet du devoir

je passe dans +h a l'oral et j'ai besoin d'aide
Faut ke sa dur 5 min et qu'il y 'ai des temps varié

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

I'm Nesserine Wüthrich, I'm 15, I was born on the 21st August, 1995.
I live in Switzerland in Lausanne specifically but I'm originally from Morocco.
I measure five feet five, my hair is dark brown and curly, my eyes are brown. I wear glasses because I do not see from afar.
Today I wear a dress, trousers, jeans, shoes, and a t-shirt.

Now I'll /I’m going to introduce my family.
So I have a brother and a sister. My brother's name is Karim, he is older than me a year, so he is 16 years. He is the largest of the family. He has short black hair and beautiful clear brown eyes. He is currently 9vso in St-Roch. He's nice and funny. In his spare time he plays football in the Concordia team. When the weather is good I go and see him play. My sister is named Sabrina, she is 7 years younger than me, she is intelligent and ever cheerful, but it has a fault (pas compris?) when she complains bored all day and it annoys me. My sister is allergic to animals, so we do not have any pet. However when she was not yet born I had a cat and a dog and two birds. My parents are divorced, so I live with my mother. Her name is Amina, she is forty-eight, it does not work,because she suffers from a disease that is fibromyalgia. My mom has black hair and is rather large. She cooks beautifully, my favourite meal is the couscous, what is delicious.

Now I'm going to tell you about my hobby:
During my free time I practice martial arts, so I can defend myself if you attack me. I dragged the weekend in town with my friends and we do shopping.
If the weather is nice and hot we had a walk in Vidy, if it rains, I'd rather go to the cinema to watch a good movie.

That is all I have to say.



6 commentaires pour ce devoir


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Anonyme
Posté le 16 juin 2011
Il faut que tu apprnes tout ca ? Ou tu devras lire ? Ou tu auras simplement quelques mots clefs ?
Tu veux de la méthode, ou que je te dise si ton texte correspond ??
Je guette ta réponse !! :)
Anonyme
Posté le 16 juin 2011
He is the eldest of the family =il est l'aîné de ...
Anonyme
Posté le 16 juin 2011
Oui tu as raison pour il est l'ainé. Moi j'avais compris il est le plus grand de la famille dans le sens de la taille puisqu'elle ou il avait dit qu'il avait 16 ans et comme il ou elle en a 15... autant pour moi, je pensais qu'elle voulait dire qu'il était le plus grand de la famille.
Anonyme
Posté le 17 juin 2011
Bonjour lolou122I'm Nesserine Wüthrich, I'm 15, I was born on the 21st August, 1995.
I live in Switzerland in Lausanne specifically but I'm originally from Morocco.
I measure five feet five, my hair is dark brown and curly, my eyes are brown. I wear glasses because I do not see from afar.
Today I wear a dress, trousers, jeans, shoes, and a t-shirt.

Now I'll /I’m going to introduce my family.
So I have a brother and a sister. My brother's name is Karim, he is older than me a year, so he is 16 years. He is the largest of the family. He has short black hair and beautiful clear brown eyes. He is currently 9vso in St-Roch. He's nice and funny. In his spare time he plays football in the Concordia team. When the weather is good I go and see him play. My sister is named Sabrina, she is 7 years younger than me, she is intelligent and ever cheerful, but it has a fault (pas compris?) when she complains bored all day and it annoys me. My sister is allergic to animals, so we do not have any pet. However when she was not yet born I had a cat and a dog and two birds. My parents are divorced, so I live with my mother. Her name is Amina, she is forty-eight, it does not work,because she suffers from a disease that is fibromyalgia. My mom has black hair and is rather large. She cooks beautifully, my favourite meal is the couscous, what is delicious.

Now I'm going to tell you about my hobby:
During my free time I practice martial arts, so I can defend myself if you attack me. I dragged the weekend in town with my friends and we do shopping.
If the weather is nice and hot we had a walk in Vidy, if it rains, I'd rather go to the cinema to watch a good movie.

That is all I have to say.



Anonyme
Posté le 17 juin 2011
Bonjour lolou122I'm Nesserine Wüthrich, I'm 15, I was born on the 21st August, 1995.
I live in Switzerland in Lausanne specifically but I'm originally from Morocco.
I measure five feet five, my hair is dark brown and curly, my eyes are brown. I wear glasses because I do not see from afar.
Today I wear a dress, trousers, jeans, shoes, and a t-shirt.

Now I'll /I’m going to introduce my family.
So I have a brother and a sister. My brother's name is Karim, he is older than me a year, so he is 16 years. He is the largest of the family. He has short black hair and beautiful clear brown eyes. He is currently 9vso in St-Roch. He's nice and funny. In his spare time he plays football in the Concordia team. When the weather is good I go and see him play. My sister is named Sabrina, she is 7 years younger than me, she is intelligent and ever cheerful, but it has a fault (pas compris?) when she complains bored all day and it annoys me. My sister is allergic to animals, so we do not have any pet. However when she was not yet born I had a cat and a dog and two birds. My parents are divorced, so I live with my mother. Her name is Amina, she is forty-eight, it does not work,because she suffers from a disease that is fibromyalgia. My mom has black hair and is rather large. She cooks beautifully, my favourite meal is the couscous, what is delicious.

Now I'm going to tell you about my hobby:
During my free time I practice martial arts, so I can defend myself if you attack me. I dragged the weekend in town with my friends and we do shopping.
If the weather is nice and hot we had a walk in Vidy, if it rains, I'd rather go to the cinema to watch a good movie.

That is all I have to say.



Anonyme
Posté le 18 juin 2011
à voir si c'est mieux :

=> Now I’m going to introduce my family.
=> because I do not see well.
=> Today I wear a dress, trousers, jeans, ?? tu porteras les 3 ?

=> and beautiful light brown eyes

bon courage!

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