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Je dois raconter mes vacances de la toussaint en 150 mots. Mais comme je ne suis pas partie en vancances, j'ai un peu de mal à trouver des choses à raconter. Si vous pouvez me donner quelques idées et surtout me dire si le peut que j'ai rédigé est juste. En vous remerciahnt par avance pour votre aide.Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
During these halloween holidays I didn't leave.The first days I have going shopping with my mother and my little sister, clothes, décorations...
I went to the fair of Monaco with my family and my friends. My little sister wanted to do every attractions, I prefer to watch people being scared. So I prefer eat an enormous Candyfloss hmm... it's delicious!
The last days, because of this bad weather I stayed at home.
These holidays already too fast spent... It's the end.
Another five weeks of school and great the Christmas holidays!
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Raconter ses vacances en anglais
Pour raconter ses vacances en anglais, une bonne méthode est de commencer par une petite introduction pour présenter en général vos vacances, sans trop entrer dans les détails.
Vous pouvez ensuite développer plus en profondeur ce que vous avez fait pendant ces vacances, vos occupations, si vous êtes partis quelque part, les films que vous avez regardé, vos sorties, etc. Organiser vos idées par ordre chronologique, pour qu'on puisse suivre correctement votre récit !
Attention à l'utilisation des temps, notamment du present perfect et l'utilisation de have et du participe passé, notamment avec les verbes irréguliers.
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Bonjour,
revoir d'urgence le present perfect (valable pour Doriian).
have + participe passé (-ed pour réguliers, liste pour irréguliers)
During these halloween holidays I didn't leave.
The first days I have gone shopping with my mother and my little sister. We went looking for clothes and décorations.
I went to the fair of Monaco with my family and my friends. My little sister wanted to do every attractions but I prefer to watch people being scared. And I really prefer to eat an enormous Candyfloss hmm... it's delicious!
Because of this bad weather I stayed at home for the last days.
These holidays went too fast... It's already the end.
Another five weeks of school and the Christmas holidays! That's great!
=> tu as fait tes devoirs
=> tu as joué
=> tu as vu tes amis (autre que le parc d'attractions)
=> tu es allée sur le net
=> tu as vu la télé (films, emissions..)
=> tu t'es reposée
tu vois, tu as encore des choses à dire! tu peux également parler de ce que tu avais envie de faire mais qui ne s'est pas fait (manque de temps, mauvaise météo, changement de plan...)
Bon courage
revoir d'urgence le present perfect (valable pour Doriian).
have + participe passé (-ed pour réguliers, liste pour irréguliers)
During these halloween holidays I didn't leave.
The first days I have gone shopping with my mother and my little sister. We went looking for clothes and décorations.
I went to the fair of Monaco with my family and my friends. My little sister wanted to do every attractions but I prefer to watch people being scared. And I really prefer to eat an enormous Candyfloss hmm... it's delicious!
Because of this bad weather I stayed at home for the last days.
These holidays went too fast... It's already the end.
Another five weeks of school and the Christmas holidays! That's great!
=> tu as fait tes devoirs
=> tu as joué
=> tu as vu tes amis (autre que le parc d'attractions)
=> tu es allée sur le net
=> tu as vu la télé (films, emissions..)
=> tu t'es reposée
tu vois, tu as encore des choses à dire! tu peux également parler de ce que tu avais envie de faire mais qui ne s'est pas fait (manque de temps, mauvaise météo, changement de plan...)
Bon courage
During those holidays, I didn't leave because I didn't want (par exemple). Day after day, I asleep at 1.30 a.m and I woke up at 12.30 a.m because I spoke with my friends by phone and I watched films.
At the beginning of the holidays,I went to shop with my mother, and my little sister for buy clothes, decoration for halloween etc...
After, I went to the fair of Manaco with my family and my friends during... (tu peux dire combien de jour tu es allé ca fera plus de mot). My little sister wanted to do all attractions but I preferto watch people because I'm scared and I prefer eat an enormous candyfloss (hmm...) It'so delicious!
At the end of those holidays, I stayed at home because It was a bad weather, it always rainned and it was cold (par exemple). Unfortunatly, those holidays went to fast!
Voila j'espere que j'ai su raconter tes vacances et j'espere que tu auras une bonne note.
At the beginning of the holidays,I went to shop with my mother, and my little sister for buy clothes, decoration for halloween etc...
After, I went to the fair of Manaco with my family and my friends during... (tu peux dire combien de jour tu es allé ca fera plus de mot). My little sister wanted to do all attractions but I preferto watch people because I'm scared and I prefer eat an enormous candyfloss (hmm...) It'so delicious!
At the end of those holidays, I stayed at home because It was a bad weather, it always rainned and it was cold (par exemple). Unfortunatly, those holidays went to fast!
Voila j'espere que j'ai su raconter tes vacances et j'espere que tu auras une bonne note.
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During my holydays , i have go shopping ( il n'y a pas de -ing a go car -ing est le general )
i have cycle with my family .
i have surf the net .
I have do homework .