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Je dois raconter mon voyage en Angleterre avec beaucoup de detailles et au preterit . J'ai deja fait un texte mais je ne sais pas si c'est pas si c'est la bonne orthographe...Pouvez-vous m'aider ?Merci d'avance
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I woke up at 5 o'clock, it was easy for me. My mother made my sandwiches, it was good. I went to school at 6:15. Camille's father dropped me off at school with Camille, but she was sightly late.We took a bus to go to Calais at 6:45 a.m we were a little late because Demonelost his ID card. I sit next to marie in the bus.
I have never took boat. I was my first time. In boat I was with Camille, Fanny and Coralie. We smelt lot of perfume and we was went to shop. It was very good.
After we has in a bus for 1 hour. And we has in England in "the historic Dockyards".I has never went in England. In Dockyard we ate in restaurant. And we began the visite. The first visite was Gannet a boat, the Ropery,show of William live, show of boat, but I don't remember the sequence. In a boat we has a phone for leader. The submarine it was so good but the mirador are so norrow. After we was in the Ropery we has made one rop, and we was in Museum of boat and museum of William.
In the free time we went to shop. I went to claire's with Camille and Fanny. I bought two necklace " best" and "friend" I gave the "best" four Camille and I went to "past time" a shop and I bought a figurine cat so cut.
I spoke with englisch four bought. I think people understand me.
I went in a shop four the retorn. I bought one key-ring teddy bear. After we went in a boat. I ate with Camille, Fanny and Coralie. And we smelt again lot of parfum. In bus I was with Camille. I have lot of speak. We lassed the people sang it was funny but I don't sang I was so happy. I retorn in school at 22:30p.m. I was so tired.
I think the travel was very good. I want went again in England because I love boat, free time and England. But four next travel I want most free time and visite one castle. I think travel is good we visite lot of inducelment. And travel in abroad is better because we speak with englisch, germanisch consequently it's so important.
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Quand tu es partis en Angleterre,est ce que c'était un échange ou bien des vacances passées là-bas?
c'était un voyage d'une journée avec l'école.
Sinon tu peux m'aider please ?
After we were in a bus ligne .9
Oui, je peux t'aider mais je ne comprend pas très bien une partie de ton expression écrite. Voici ce que j'ai fais pour l'instant mais je n'ai pas encore terminé donc dis moi ce que tu en penses pour l'instant!! Okay?
One day, I went to United Kingdom with my school.
The day when we had to go, I woke up at five o'clock. I was so exited and very happy that's why it was easy for me to get up at this hour.
My Mother was cooking a big meal for me while I was preparing myself for the journey.
camille who is my best friend and his father dropped me off at the entrance of the school at 6:15
We were a bit late because Demone a boy (or a girl) from my class lost his ID card.( vous êtes arivés en retard avant de prendre le bateau ou le bus)
Finally, with all my classmates We took the bus, I was sitting next to Marie an other friend of mine during the road, we were talking about hilarious things.
We arrived at 6:45 to Calais.
After that, We went on the boat, my friends were extremely happy and me as well because this was my first time that I traveled on a ship althought the duration
of the journey was short.
In the boat, Cammille, Coralie, Fanny who are my friends, we were smelling perfume like Dior, Nina Ricci, YSL...It was very funny.
We took a bus again for an hour.
One day, I went to United Kingdom with my school.
The day when we had to go, I woke up at five o'clock. I was so exited and very happy that's why it was easy for me to get up at this hour.
My Mother was cooking a big meal for me while I was preparing myself for the journey.
camille who is my best friend and his father dropped me off at the entrance of the school at 6:15
We were a bit late because Demone a boy (or a girl) from my class lost his ID card.( vous êtes arivés en retard avant de prendre le bateau ou le bus)
Finally, with all my classmates We took the bus, I was sitting next to Marie an other friend of mine during the road, we were talking about hilarious things.
We arrived at 6:45 to Calais.
After that, We went on the boat, my friends were extremely happy and me as well because this was my first time that I traveled on a ship althought the duration
of the journey was short.
In the boat, Cammille, Coralie, Fanny who are my friends, we were smelling perfume like Dior, Nina Ricci, YSL...It was very funny.
We took a bus again for an hour.
c'est super, Merci beaucoup YurripeChan
Camille was sLightly late
I sat next to M
I had never taken a boat...we went to the shops
au lieu de 'after we had in a bus...':
Then we got back on the bus for another hour and we arrived in 'the historic dockyards' (dans quelle ville?Londres?)
I had never been to England
la suite plus tard
I sat next to M
I had never taken a boat...we went to the shops
au lieu de 'after we had in a bus...':
Then we got back on the bus for another hour and we arrived in 'the historic dockyards' (dans quelle ville?Londres?)
I had never been to England
la suite plus tard
Mais avec plaisir, ne t'inquiète je n'ai pas encore finis quand j'aurai le temps, je finirai. Okay?
In the Dockyard we ate in a restaurant and we began the visit
J'ai trouvé: tu as visité THE HISTORIC DOCKYARD IN CHATHAM, là tu as visité THE VICTORIAN ROPERY,THE HM SUBMARINE OCELOT, THE GANNET
J'ai trouvé: tu as visité THE HISTORIC DOCKYARD IN CHATHAM, là tu as visité THE VICTORIAN ROPERY,THE HM SUBMARINE OCELOT, THE GANNET
It was my first time in England.
And we were on the bus again. An hour later we arrived at the HISTORIC DOCKYARD in Chatham.We ate in a restaurant and we began the visits. I don't remember the order of the visits.
We first visited a boat, the Gannet. We visited a submarine, the Ocelot: it was so good , so exciting , the "mirador"? (the tower ) was so narrow.We visited the Victorian Ropery and we made a rope. We also visited the Royal Dockyard Museum
And we were on the bus again. An hour later we arrived at the HISTORIC DOCKYARD in Chatham.We ate in a restaurant and we began the visits. I don't remember the order of the visits.
We first visited a boat, the Gannet. We visited a submarine, the Ocelot: it was so good , so exciting , the "mirador"? (the tower ) was so narrow.We visited the Victorian Ropery and we made a rope. We also visited the Royal Dockyard Museum
the mirador , c'était quoi? une partie du sous-marin?
on dit plutôt "on the bus"
I spoke English with the shop assistants.I think they understood me.
We chatted a lot (on a beaucoup bavardé)
but I didn't sing,i was so happy.We were back to the school at 10.30pm.
I think the trip (voyage ) was very good. I want to go to England again
but FOR the next trip I want more free time and visit a castle.
quel est ce mot : inducelment
a bientôt
We chatted a lot (on a beaucoup bavardé)
but I didn't sing,i was so happy.We were back to the school at 10.30pm.
I think the trip (voyage ) was very good. I want to go to England again
but FOR the next trip I want more free time and visit a castle.
quel est ce mot : inducelment
a bientôt
HMS Gannet
HMS Ocelot
Dans ton récit, tu peux appeler les bateaux ainsi.C'est le nom officiel.
Pourquoi?
HMS veut dire: His Majesty's Ship ou HER Majesty's Ship
c'est à dire "le bateau de sa majesté"
En effet, les bateaux de sont censés appartenir au roi ou à la reine
HMS Ocelot
Dans ton récit, tu peux appeler les bateaux ainsi.C'est le nom officiel.
Pourquoi?
HMS veut dire: His Majesty's Ship ou HER Majesty's Ship
c'est à dire "le bateau de sa majesté"
En effet, les bateaux de sont censés appartenir au roi ou à la reine
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