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A few years ago, a visitor to Tantallon Castle took oa picture of what looked like a man or a woman, looking down through a window at the top of the castle. So, I convinced my parents to take me there. I wanted to see for myself. When we arrived at Tantallon, I immediately felt uncomfortable because the castle is a 14th-century fortress: it is going to ruin and really looks depressing and gloomy. The surrounding landscape adds to this feeling of uneasiness as the building stands at the top of a promontory and overlooks the sea.
I walked into the castle but I didn't follow my parents. I went down the dilapidated steps leading to the dungeons. Now, here is whereit gets strange.
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tu peux parler de la rencontre d'un personnage mystique, étrange, hors la norme : contenu assez roman noir, gothique
Bah regarde ce que j'ai fait :
When I decide to ascend because there is nothing interesing, I have notice that this is darker than usually. It is now that he is arised, the same that in the picture taken by the visitor. He walk toward me and said me that if I want to go back, I must fights me against him. I was very terrified because I ask to myself why can I win against a ghost. Before we begin, he told me all rules. If I win, he must let me go but if he win, I must stay here until my death. He ask to me if I have all understand and say me to follow him. He pass across the wall, and I have had an idea, I try to open the door, it was easy, it is not locked. So I opened it and run to my parents. I don't speak them about the ghost, they will not believe me. But now, I don't that this castle is really haunting.
Idée de suite: the main character heard strange sounds and see shadows on the wall. He looks for his parents but doesn't find them; He goes into a room and see shit of paper Written: GO OUT OR YOU DIED.......
A toi d'imaginer la suite
tu as fait des erreurs... heard strange sounds and see shadows on the wall.C'est pas see c'est sore!!
Et la prof n'apprecirai pas le mot shit!!!
je suis bilangue j'ai aidé un de vos camarade tout a l'heure je vais vous invente la suite!Je vous promet ce que j'ai ecrit viens de mon imagination et pas d'internet et tout et juste j'ai habite en anglerre presque 10 ans !!Vous pouvez utiliser ce que j'ai ecrit et si vous ne comprener pas metter le dans google traduction!
C'est une rédaction, on a un début de texte et il faut inventer la suite.
A few years ago, a visitor to Tantallon Castle took oa picture of what looked like a man or a woman, looking down through a window at the top of the castle. So, I convinced my parents to take me there. I wanted to see for myself. When we arrived at Tantallon, I immediately felt uncomfortable because the castle is a 14th-century fortress: it is going to ruin and really looks depressing and gloomy. The surrounding landscape adds to this feeling of uneasiness as the building stands at the top of a promontory and overlooks the sea.
I walked into the castle but I didn't follow my parents. I went down the dilapidated steps leading to the dungeons. Now, here is where it gets strange.
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La suite ==> I took pictures and displayed them on http://www.theparanormalguide.com/blog/tantallon-castle-ghost