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Je travaille pour le journal de l'école. J'ai rencontré un(e) jeune américain(e) avec qui j'aiabordé les thèmes suivants : « driving habits in the US » et « road safety ». Je rédige cette
interview afin qu'elle puisse être publiée dans le prochain numéro du journal.
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Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Last holidays I went to the United States(US) and I met Johnson Mark and I interwieved him for my scholl news paper My subject is driving habits and road safety in the US.Johnson is a young drivers who is 17 years old and he lives in New york with his parents he passed his driver licence in august 2008. His parents have set camera in his car because they think he writes and received a lot of text messages when he drives but he just drives to go to the supermarkt and he found the behaviour of his parents is STRETCH.He never went to school with his car because there are no places for parking But even if their were places to park his parents was never goHe has never had a crash accident because he is prudent.
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Au lieu de dire "my subject is" il faut dire "it deals with driving..."
On dis "a young driver" sans "s" à la fin de "driver" parce que ce n'est pas un verbe.
Ensuite c'est "he had his license" on ne dis jamais "he PASSED his license" et ça s'écrit "license"
"Have set A camera" ensuite c'est "he writes and receives" et pas "received" et "when he is driving"
Puis "He ONLY drives", "SUPERMARKET" ensuite tu as écrit "he found the behaviour of his parents is STRETCH" La fin de cette phrase est incohérente parce que "to stretch" signifie "s'étirer" donc réfléchis à ce que tu voulais dire parce que pour le moment ca ne veut rien dire.
"But even if THERE were places to park his parents WERE never go" là aussi la fin de ta phrase est incohérente mais je suppose que tu voulais dire "But even if there were places to park his parents will never let him go"
Pour finir: "He has never had a crash because he is prudent."
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