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Bonjour,
je dois rédiger en anglais une histoire de naufrage avec du suspens, comme le titanic ou les dents de la mer, il faut imaginer une situation et decrire les difficultés.
J'avoue que je ne sais comment faire, mon anglais n'est pas terrible.
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Voilà ce que j'ai fait :When I go to CUBA . I can see a beautiful boats. There is a boat her name is "Alex" and it go to the sea all days. But, one day there is an accident, a violent accident ; the boat broke in two and the passagers are rescu by ....
Pour la suite je n'en sais rien.
Merci de corriger mes fautes et de m'aider pour la suite avec suspens.
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Ne fais pas attention à ce que dit victor car c'est un ....... !
Quoi ?
Je t'aide car c"est pou demain, mais je te conseille de l'aprendre par coeur...conjugaison etc sont très important.
When I go to Cuba I see many beautiful boats. There is a boat whose name is "Alex" which goes out to sea every day. But, one day there was a violent accident, the boat broke in two when it hit another boat passing by, a life boat arrived in time to save the frightened passengers before "Alex" sank.
The other boat was bigger and stronger so survived the shock.
There was an old Lady who had to be taken to hospital as she had broke her arm, i was told a few days later that she was well.
When I go to Cuba I see many beautiful boats. There is a boat whose name is "Alex" which goes out to sea every day. But, one day there was a violent accident, the boat broke in two when it hit another boat passing by, a life boat arrived in time to save the frightened passengers before "Alex" sank.
The other boat was bigger and stronger so survived the shock.
There was an old Lady who had to be taken to hospital as she had broke her arm, i was told a few days later that she was well.
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I am going to tell what happened few months ago, something i never thought it could arrive. I was, as usually, going to Cuba during summer, by boat. I waked up this morning with a strange feeling of my last nightmare. But anyway i was so looking forward to go to Cuba. I took the boat with mummy at 6pm and we were both so happy to get there. After about 1 hour in the boat. My mother began to scream, and I told her, What ? What ? What the hell's going on ?
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