Répondre à une lettre

Publié le 10 mars 2012 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 17 mars 2012 dans 12A
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Sujet du devoir

Je dois répondre à une lettre que m'a envoyé un garçon nommé Alisdair, qui est anglais. Je réponds à ces questions et j'aimerais que l'on me dise si mon anglais est correcte, et s'il y a des choses à corriger. Merci d'avance !

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Dear Alisdair,

Your e-mail made me smile, once everything translated. In my tour to present me. I am 15 years old, I think I am rather intelligent, I am honest and I like laughing. I like the studies and I am a perfectionist and accurate, what is not necessarily a quality by the way. In any case I am certainly more modest than you!
I would really like to meet an English person too, to improve my English (not terrible at this moment). My mother is also a little bit rusty in English but my father and my mother-in-law speak this language fluently.
I have two sisters, Maëlis (who is 8 years old) and Louna (who is 3 and a half years old). All three we get along well but they do not live any more with me from this year. They live with my mother and I live with my father and my stepmother. She is very kind, we get along well. And I have a cat, who is called Orange, it’s funny isn’t it? For my musical tastes, I don’t like rap at all.
My activities? I like reading and writing. Contrary to the fact that people think, I am someone opened and I am not plunged all the time into my books! I go to the swimming pool and to the cinema rather often. I do not know too much about the news but I don't mind! It is just that I often get better with the adults. Finally I tend to talk too much, it is also one of my defects: I confide too much. This time I was reasonable.
I have a nickname too, but I am not crazy enough to say it to you! It is too ridiculous. But it doesn’t bother me in front of my family and my close friends. We also call me "the intellectual ", it is not very affectionate.
I also keep a personal diary, as many girls of my age. But the boys sometimes keep a diary? What about you?
Bye for now!
PS: what studies would you like to follow later?




7 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 10 mars 2012
Generalement ,c'est une lettre passable mais il faut eviter les repetitions comme : but , and ... il y a impeu de confusion dans la lettre et t'as fait des fautes dans la ponctuation . esaaye de corriger ca .
Bonne Chance ^^
Anonyme
Posté le 10 mars 2012
Merci pour votre aide!
Anonyme
Posté le 10 mars 2012
De rien .
Anonyme
Posté le 10 mars 2012
It's my turn to introduce myself: c'est à mon tour de me présenter.

Il y a quelques fautes mais ce n'est pas trop mal. Je les corrigerai plus tard
Anonyme
Posté le 11 mars 2012
Merci
Anonyme
Posté le 11 mars 2012
Dear Alisdair,
How are you? I am fine!
Thank you for your e-mail. I pesonally found it very funny!
It's now my turn to introduce myself.
I am 15 years old, I think I am rather intelligent, I am honest and I like laughing. I like studying and I am a perfectionist and details-oriented,which can be a disadvantage for some people! Anyway I am certainly more modest than you!
I would really like to meet an English person too, to improve my English (right now my English is not that good!). My mother does not speak English very well either but my father and my mother-in-law speak this language fluently.
I have two sisters, Maëlis (who is 8 years old) and Louna (who is 3 and half years old). We get along with each other. Unfortunately we don't live together anymore. I have been living with my father and my stepmother for one year. My stepmother is a very nice person and I get along with her. my sisters live with my mother. I have a cat, who is called Orange, it’s funny isn’t it? As for music, I don’t like rap at all.
Concerning my hobbies, I like reading and writing. Contrary to what most people think of me, I am someone opened and I am not always poring over my books! I go to the swimming pool and to the cinema quite often. I do not know very much about the news but I don't mind! It is just that I often get better with adults. Finally I tend to be too talkative, it is also one of my faults: I trust people easily. This time I have been reasonable.
I have a nickname too, but I am not crazy enough to tell you what it is! It is too ridiculous! But I am not embarassed in front of my family and my close friends. I am also called "the intellectual ", it is not very affectionate.
I also keep a personal diary, like many girls of my age. But boys sometimes keep a diary don't they? What about you? Tell me more about your hobbies, your daily life.
Write back soon!
PS: what studies would you like to do in the future?
Anonyme
Posté le 11 mars 2012
Merci pour votre aide!

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